MLP artist and fanfic writer. Known for Flurry Heart's Story and My Little Sister is a Dragon.
The Diamond Dogs have returned and have captured Spike and all the ponies except for Rarity to make them work as slaves to find diamonds in their new domain, Mud Fortress. Rarity must brave the filthy wasteland before her and make it to Mud Fortress to rescue her friends. But will she be able to when Mud Fortress is full of…well, MUD?!
Original release: June 22-July 20, 2011 on Deviant Art
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I remember this. Awesome.
Read this on DeviantArt.
But, um ... shouldn't Spike be listed as a character?
This could actually be an episode.
1312837 Was wondering the same thing.
1312837 I think the icon of the Mane 6 is meant to have him in it...
Nicely done!
Great story! It should have more likes than it does!
I half found myself hoping Rarity would be a little insane after the whole incident. Sequel opportunity?
1323250 Insane? not at all, she's proud of what she did for her friends.
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Oh, I meant from the dirt exposure. She'd lose it due to the stress, sort of like Twi in Lesson Zero. Her friends would have to somehow snap her out of it.
1357619 Well she loves her friends more than her looks.
Man, I can't even tell you how badly I've wanted to see a fic like this. Seriously, there needs to be an episode where Rarity does something like this. She's always seemed like the type who would lay her life down for her friends if it ever came to that (well, they all seem like they would do that, but Rarity in particular) and I can so buy that she would go through something like that for them. I hope one of these days she gets her kick ass hero moment in the show, but until then, this fic was great way to hold me over. Thank you for writing it, it made my day!
1621327 Thank you for the kind words!
someone needs to do art of rambarity i think
now this is a good fic and look for rarity
Ohh spike you gotta let it go
gosh darn it you came out of no way anyway I hate to break it to you buddy but it's not going to happen
Ok this is an interesting start for the aftermath of A Dog and Pony Show but it looks like the diamond dogs have another plans for Twilight and her friends I wonder what's going to happen?
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Well you'll be able to read on to find out without having to wait for an update cuz I finished this story 10 years ago! XD
The part may be cringy but her performance was pretty funny how she tricks them
Oh boy things really escalated quickly for the ponies and spike so they were founding the gems and everything but then suddenly they all get trap be the net and the diamond dogs show and took the ponies and spike except Rarity who is on the other trap but soon she got her self free but now she needs to save her friends even though the cave is full of mud but she have to save them I kind of forgot this is during season 1 and Rarity is a little bit finicky but she will do just for her friends
And yet you use a couple of strong magic when you come across one of the most dangerous creatures like Tirek and the shadow of pony and starlight glimmer just saying. And I know this is during season 1 before all those characters came along but I just wanted to put that out
Ok dang this is a very tough situation here so anyway rarity is trying harvest to get to the others despite how much she doesn't want to get dirty but right now she has to for her friends meanwhile somewhere in the mud cave Twilight and the others well Twilight mostly trying to convince the Diamond Dogs to let them go but unfortunately it didn't work and something tells me they really thought of it a head this time now and by the way way to nerf Twilight not using her magic because she doesn't want to Resort violence but then again that's probably how she will react back in season 1 when she didn't want to show off when everybody got so ticked off about Trixie showing off but it was different but yet in her mind she doesn't want to Resort any violence well the only chance they got is Rarity I'm sure she'll make it
Twilight I know you don't like violence but COME ON!!!!!!!
Whoa thats actually really cool so it looks like Rarity got herself surrounded by mud monsters and she was very terrified but something really hit her about not seeing her friends again and how they've been treated so with that anger determination she overcome her Fear To Face any threats even if it gets dirty and I'm very glad that she overcomes at and now she has to save them meanwhile Twilight and the others are basically working and are complaining they didn't have any lunch so what's that the dogs facts about the food hopefully this will distract them and Twilight is using Rarities ability to find a job unfortunately she forgot and really not the good time either so right now they have to improvise and hopefully Rarity will get there fast as she can but I got to admit that was pretty cool how she pick up all those Spears now she really is determined to save her friends I like that
Oh for Celestia sake
Pinkie
“Give up, Rarity, or your little scaled friend here won’t be so lucky!”
“RARITY, DON’T WORRY ABOUT ME, SAVE THE OTHERS!!!” Spike cried.
It almost sound like in the episode the ending of the end when Chrysalis have spike and threatens him if they don't give up
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Whoa that was pretty freaking epic here so anyway the three Diamond Dogs return for the food but unfortunately what they found is an empty cart and Spike looks like he ate all the gem but of course Pinkie Pie blab the truth dang it Pinkie but twilight try to convince them that they are no use because she can't remember the spell that Rarity taught her and hopefully they can use that as an excuse to leave but they didn't buy it and now they've been locked up but luckily Rarity showed up and to everybody surprise she looks way different but judging in the picture of your cover she look pretty cool and very intimidating but the leader call out the hounds to fight her but with her fighting skill she managed to defeat the dog Army but they try to use spike to make her surrender but of course it didn't work and we're already use her magic to fling them and freeing the others and was that she finally save them and again this was pretty freaking cool
You mean low or something else
shucks
Yup because in the later Seasons you'll need it when a threat will come
Ok wow this was a pretty good story and it really brings back memories how towards the end of the episode they always write a friendship report to Princess Celestia what they learned I miss that so much and this was a pretty good lesson as well keep up the good work