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Mockingbirb


A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)

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Weeks ago, Flash Sentry disappeared. Sunset searches for him, and discovers the horrifying answer to the mystery that no one else seems to care about.


This story was inspired by eemoo1o's "A Flash In The Pan," and can optionally be read as an unofficial and NON-canon (but authorized!) sequel to that story.

Thank you, eemoo1o! :fluttershysad: :twilightsmile:

I guess you don't HAVE to read the prequel, but it does provide some very relevant backstory, especially about the general apathy, and most importantly the ballpoint pens. Do you really want to miss out on all that foreshadowing? I don't think so!
:twilightsmile:

For prereading, I thank: eemoo1o, "CarlosSainz55 (no, not THAT CarlosSainz55, a different one.)"

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Comments ( 18 )

Dude, Wallflower's a cunt (or not. I don't know).

This Wallflowers a monster, I mean I get its a comedy but even so.

Half tempted to do a response fic to this response fic.

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I authorize informal unofficial non-canon sequels to my own story, although maybe you should also check with the author of the original story, who might have something to say about sequels, since a sequel to my story is also a sequel to their story too.

I also think my story's situation might have...complications?

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F:yay:cking f:yay:ckity f:yay:ck it! Let’s turn this somovabitch into a trend :pinkiehappy:

I read this before reading the original that inspired it; this was pretty funny standing alone. :rainbowlaugh: (Obviously dark humor though, not light humor by any stretch of the imagination due to the ruthlessness) :pinkiecrazy:. When read with the original, it's certainly an intriguing explanation! :derpyderp1:

Already two hate stories sprung out of this shit. I hope you're proud.

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Already two hate stories sprung out of this shit. I hope you're proud.

"Hate stories" is such a vague phrase.

Are you referring to hatred against Wallflower, or hatred of a story for which someone lovingly writes a fanfic, or what exactly?

Personally, If I don't enjoy a lot about a story, I don't want to write a fanfic for it. That's how it seems to work out for me, at least. I'm glad that eemoo1o seems to understand my point of view.

I just wanted more. :moustache:

I also don't hate Wallflower Blush, either, or I wouldn't bother to write the variety of stories about her that I do.

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"Hate stories" is such a vague phrase.

Hate fics. Revenge Porn. Stories made with the sole intention of torturing a character for X or Y reason. Promoting hatred never-endingly

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The truth is, I'm not really very interested in torturing a character just to torture a character, or to '(over?)punish someone who deserves it' in the world of...fiction.

I thought my story was an interesting possible answer to a mystery, and I thought the somewhat ambiguous outcome was interesting too.

On a related note, I hear eemoo1o, who authorized my non-canon fanfic sequel ahead of time, might be coming out with a canon sequel soon.

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I get that you don't, but this story has already made two more that do only care about it.

I do not know what the original author intended, probably this considering they gave you the okay. But the original story definitely didn't include Wallflower or a punishable victim till you came around. It went from thrilling mystery to hate-story thanks to this one.

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Might I ask as to what the two hate fics are? (I think I’ve already come across one of them, definitely haven’t come across two, though)

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Ahh—so I have read both of them.

Newton’s Law is perfectly authorised by Mockingbirb and I both. The other… not so much.

NL isn’t a hate fic. SSGH a thousand percent is.

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Inspired by the virulent reaction I felt reading Mockingbirb's "Even the Milk Cartons Don't Care"

So, let’s see if I got this ending right: Wallflower was turned into an undying plant after a confrontation with Discord as punishment for her crimes against humanity.

This tells me otherwise but I'll trust your judgement.

And yeah, the other definitely is because it's basically the author's past-time to write these kind of stuff

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Hello 😁

As the author of Newton's Law I received permission from both Eemoo1o and mockingbirb to create a non-canon sequel. I enjoyed both fics, Eemoo1os is the more serious, sombre piece whilst Mockingbirbs is a tad surreal and wacky (yet still with that horror edge).

Since my fic is a direct sequel to Mockingbirbs I'm attempting to tie my more serious style with his wackier style. Nonetheless Wallflower commits several heinous acts in Mockingbirbs fic, just out of spite. Including murder and slavery whilst justifying it on the shakiest grounds accordingly, like all villains , she gets her comeuppance. A tad cruel perhaps, but her crimes are equally awful. Whilst I extenuate them in my work, it's only because when she's reached the level in Mockingbirbs fic she's no excuse not to commit 'lesser' ones.

As for Wallflower herself? I rather like her as a character, she's fun, has a neat design and the memory stone is a fun tool. Plus she's just a blank enough slate that you can do alot of work with her. I intend to do some more positive stories featuring her in the future, including a one shot in my "Infinite Shards" crossover series.

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