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This story takes place after the episode "Do princesses dream of magic sheep?"
Big Macintosh lies deep within the dream realm, where he repeatedly has dreams of being an alicorn princess. Each one has a variation of how becomes one, or sometimes it seems he always was an alicorn? But Princess Luna then comes to the rescue and helps guide him through these dreams giving him advice and pushing him forward to return to the waking world.
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Not much I can say beyond really good job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. And, yeah, good use of inspiration from that "Do Princesses Dream of Magical Sheep?" episode (surprisingly, Alicorn Mac fics aren't as common as one would think).
Anyway, definitely looking forward to more of this.
Applejack! Language! There are sensitive ears listening.
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Yeah AJ! You can do better then that!
...As in you should be using ALL the curse words!
Hosstralians and the gryphons of Eyreland have turned such wholeshome activities into national passtimes!
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Okay, fair enough.
Considering the situation, I suppose a bit of... foul language is warranted.
Just make sure that there are no young'uns in earshot. I mean, I'm just saying...
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Well children do need a role model.
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Tolkien would be proud
Thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. Certainly appreciate the work going into the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Yeah, kind of feel for Mac here waking up confused in a strange world with conflicting memories. And, yeah, it's probably going to get worse before it gets better.
VERY much looking forward to more of this.
I'll be honest, I really like this story but it is also quite confusing with all those dreams and knowing which is real or if there is even a moment of reality
Hey there. Sorry I took so long to get around to a response. Nothing to blame except self-admitted laziness and difficulty coming up with stuff I haven't already said in other reviews. Still, this IS a rather interesting story with a great deal of potential.
Another possible dream world: Something modelled after old super-hero comics that has Mac as an Earth pony colt being entrusted with the power to transform into an adult alicorn with the aid of a magic word using it to battle a pretty wide range of villains and monsters.
But I can respect your right to NOT use the idea if you don't want to and will profusely apologize for wasting your time.
Anyway, on to the next chapter.
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Well, to be fair, I'm pretty sure that's the point of the story, but, yeah, I CAN understand the confusion.
Hello again. Once more you did a wonderful job on this latest chapter. Yeah, I DO feel for Mac ending up on a world where his sisters and grandmother treated him like a servant at best. That IS rough, though it might teach him a bit of empathy toward Spike (okay, Twilight USUALLY doesn't do it ON PURPOSE, but still - ).
Well, certainly going to be looking forward to seeing the next world.
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So far Big Mac is still in the dream realm and i'll explain what's happening in the next chapter. Also next chapter is going to be pretty cool.
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Yeah. Gotcha. Thanks very much.
You said suddenly twice.
I think one joke quote I saw went like
Or something like that.
Uh... that's maniaval laughter. Maybe fanatical.
I think it's better to be a prince, not a princess.
This description method is too realistic.Ha ha
Anyone else getting a reminder of Monkeybone?
Is there going to be a sequel to this perhaps?
I give this story the full 5 on the
itude meter. Unfortunately, I can't find a seal of approval for Big Mac, but if there was one, I would give it that too.
Here's hoping that whatever comes for Big Mac, it goes well.