This is the story of my OC BlueStar of how he became a Royal Guard and his mission to Defend Equestria.
It was not a easy journey but BlueStar always wanted to Defend Equestria and would do so with all he had. He would have to face struggles both from without and within and sometimes that would take him to places that were very dark.
But BlueStar will always find away to Stay Strong and Pony On and hold back the darkness and protect the Magic of Friendship and Equestria itself.
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interesting, could swear i saw your oc pic before. Always love a good royal guard story, got a few royal guards myself.
Your portrayal of recruitment is also an interesting take. I ironically had once the ideas of a handicapped pony being a royal guard
Nice work, though as friendly suggestion, at such long conversations, try to show the emotions, I did the same error at the start
Thanks! I'm not exactly famous Brony but I've been around.
I primarily have a YouTube channel where I do mostly Reaction videos, but also Analysis and AfterThought reviews to MLP.
I have to say a lot of this isn't so umm...refined as it should be but I've always liked to think that getting into the Royal Guards was "tough"
Not just any pony could become a Royal Guard and then Zephyr became one....But fortunately he had to turn in his helmet and the honor of the Guard was quickly restored. 😊
A handicapped Royal Guard is a interesting idea I do have to say it would have to depend on the handicap.
At the same time there's a place for everypony if you look hard enough. 😊
Stay Strong and Pony On
BlueStar Out
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Heyo, just thought I'd stop by and offer a little tip. See the box with the two arrows in the upper right corner of the comment box? Clicking that allows you to directly reply to someone. They'll get notified and will respond if they so wish.
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Indeed, I like to think its actually a well-respected job and such, that they actually can get things done.
And if you like to hear more, be my guest
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Thanks and that's a good suggestion. The conversations between Luna and BlueStar do drone on a bit.
Stay Strong and Pony On
BlueStar Out
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You're welcome
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If you're referring to me hmm I thought I did that. I clicked on the box labeled reply and it opened a text dialog at the bottom of the screen where I entered the comment.
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pardon, but you answered your own comments
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Oh sorry about that.
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just as friendly heads up
a first story published in under a week despite not having access to auto-approval??? >.>
man, the metric truckload of caffeine I dumped at fimfic hq must've finally hit
quite a surprise you uploaded everything at once
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Let's just say I've had this story for a while and have only gotten around to posting it now...
Still I hope every pony enjoys!
Stay Strong and Pony On
BlueStar Out
impressive
nice interaction
nice work but friendly suggestion, watch the paragraphs, makes reading easier
that was...an interesting test
a very nice ending!
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Ok I added a few more paragraphs and thanks!
Stay Strong and Pony On
BlueStar Out
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I have to admit it was...rough, but let's just say this a test that BlueStar needed to face.
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Thanks! I think this story has kind of rough in places but overall I think it came ok.
Who knows I might write some more BlueStar stories in the future.
Stay Strong and Pony On
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Youre welcome!
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Of course.
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If you do, i hope...Well, that you mind find use for hanzal and fletcher. Sorry, old habit
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I've changed the test a little bit since long story short is it seemed like a good idea at the time but was probably way too harsh...
I've promised BlueStar that one day I will write a story that involves him having a nice vacation on a beach somewhere 😊
Stay Strong and Pony On
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I really appreciate you offering for your characters to appear in one of my stories.
With the next generation not that far away I do not know how much writing I will do but I will definitely consider including them.
You can never have too many Royal Guard characters and we can always use more ponies willing to Defend Equestria!
Stay Strong and Pony On
BlueStar Out
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Okay. If its okay to ask, ever thought if he would find love?
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Well, who said g4 stories have to stop with g5 around?
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Hmm maybe.
Let's just say it's very lonely being Defender of Equestria...
So BlueStar would appreciate a some pony. 😊
Stay Strong and Pony On
BlueStar Out
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Well it's mostly because I'm primarily a reactor and once the show comes back it will pretty much put a end to everything else.
Especially since almost certainly all the episodes will be released at once...That will keep me very busy...
In any case let's just say BlueStar's story may not end with G4 😊
Stay Strong and Pony On
BlueStar Out
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If you need a mare, i might have one for you or 2
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Ah, right
Cool