This story takes place during the events in the episodes Cutie Re-mark Parts 1 and 2
When Starlight tried to go back in time to change the events of the mane six, her actions led to her and Twilight trapping themselves in a world where Discord had taken over Equestria. They eventually meet up with Princess Celestia and Luna, who are trapped in the same world ravaged by the lord of chaos, and go on a journey to find the bearers of the elements of harmony to save the world from Discord's clutches.
Cover artist: Pridark
Editor: The Fan without a Face
Chapters (8)
This is what I like. Having Starlight herself SEEN the dark and corrupted alternate timelines. And showing her the major consequences on her actions.
This is... Hard to read.
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Do you mean in a depressing sense?
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Yes. I'm sorry. I can't read this. It feels... Hopeless.
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I mean that's kind of the idea. Also sorry about asking that but I thought you meant hard to read in the sense it was badly written.
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I get it. But it was just so wrong to me. Also, my bad.
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No problem, just checking since I know not all the sentences are perfect, but I feel like I atleast did a semi-competent job editing it.
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Still, I can't support this story as a reader.
Finally someone decided to touch the Discord Wins future.
I'm really digging this story, I hope you haven't discontinued it, but if you have please let me know what would've happened to the remaining Mane 6 in the alternate universe.
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No I haven't discontinued it but Im taking my time with this story. And making sure to go over every chapter throughly. I do apologize but I really want this story to be good. But I appreciate you wanting more. The next chapter will be published sometime in November preferably before the holidays.
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Thank you for your prompt reply, as well as your honesty.
I can certainly appreciate you wanting to make this story as perfect as possible. You've clearly put a lot of time and effort into this one. So, I'm sure the next chapter will be well worth the wait.
That said, would it be too much to ask for some kind of hint as to what's become of the other Element Bearers in this timeline? Or at least Rarity? She's my favorite.
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Still feels hopeless
Interesting chapter, keep it up dude.
Discord rules
Celestia drools
Hahahahahahahah
Always was odd in show how spike never got that no sonic rain rainboom. Means he never be hatched
Kind of fast at parts but fun
Are you going to do all of alternate timelines displayed in those episodes, or are you just going to stop at the Discord timeline?
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Honestly at this moment in time I don't have plans to write a story about every timeline. It would take to long. Maybe in the future I would do the Chrysalis takes over timeline.