Family Nonetheless

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Living in an unfamiliar world with very little magic had been thoroughly challenging.
Living in a world with magic but being unable to use it even more so.
But sometimes, just living with each other is the hardest part, no matter how much you love your found sisters.

Credit for Cover Art belongs to N-Yui

Chapters (3)

Every Day's The Same · 8th Aug 2022 · 1,275 words
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The Family That Fights Together... · 8th Aug 2022 · 1,493 words
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...Stays Together · 8th Aug 2022 · 829 words
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Oreng Pingvin

Oreng Pingvin #1 · Aug 15th, 2022 · · · ...Stays Together ·

Beautiful
And I'm wondering why fic went to "completed"?

Luminous Comet

Luminous Comet #2 · Aug 15th, 2022 · · · ...Stays Together ·

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Because it was completed from the beginning. I wrote all three chapters as a complete story and meant to put it up that way.
I just failed to actually change it to "Completed" before submitting and noticed a short while after.

Oreng Pingvin

Oreng Pingvin #3 · Aug 16th, 2022 · · · ...Stays Together ·

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Ok

Allsmiles

Allsmiles #4 · Aug 17th, 2022 · · · ...Stays Together ·

(I enjoyed this. Lovely little slice of life and dealing with problems. Well done!)

Luminous Comet

Luminous Comet #5 · Aug 17th, 2022 · 1 · · ...Stays Together ·

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for the feedback.

Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #6 · Aug 18th, 2022 · · · ...Stays Together ·

This is a very well-written story you have here. Excellent character writing, and an excellent portrayal of realistic suffering (almost too real for my tastes). The pacing was good; not too long, and not too short. It's a shame this hasn't gotten more attention than it has. You should really add some cover art to your stories; that goes a long way to getting viewers.

Luminous Comet

Luminous Comet #7 · Aug 18th, 2022 · · · ...Stays Together ·

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Wow, thank you, that is a pretty strong compliment.

And thank you for the advice.
Cover art is missing from all my work except my main project and even for that it's somewhat generic.
Guess I'm just having trouble finding the right ones.

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #8 · Jul 22nd, 2023 · · · Every Day's The Same ·

With a slow sigh, Adagio tried to let it go. She had more important things to do than be mad about every single thing. And there were a lot of things to be mad about. Instead, she took off her nightshirt, got dressed, brushed her hair and tied it back, and finally headed into the bathroom to put on her face.

Doesn't she mean put makeup on her face?

With their previous income dried up and their savings dwindling, Adagio had to grab for every job she could get. Luckily, through personal interests, she had managed to pick up some skills that at least qualified her for assistant positions. Some days she had a shift at the boutique, on others a few hours at the music store. On some, she had to rush from one end of the mall to the other when she was double-booked.

Talk about one busy schedule. I'd hate to be that busy with work.

Sonata slapped her hand away. "Shut up! You're not our mom! You're not even actually my sisters! I hate you!" She sobbed and shoved Adagio aside, running out the door she had still left open.

Saw that coming a mile away.

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #9 · Jul 22nd, 2023 · · · The Family That Fights Together... ·

Another light flashed over the playground, followed by two more. "Stop right there! What's going on!?" Aria didn't relax, only pulling Sonata closer, when a small group of police officers came rushing closer.

Welp, they're screwed.

Aria stood up to head out and Sonata was right behind her, lightly holding onto her arm again. It wasn't a big mystery who could have come to get them and Aria prepared herself to face the storm. She slipped her arm out of Sonata's hand to take it with her own instead, before the were led through into the lobby.

before they were*

ScisetShimmerEvan