Subject: Shadow Sky .......................... The multiverse its ON________________________________.
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Returning home is his mission, a 12-year-old kid is forced to enter the world of Equestria at the whim of the god of chaos.
☆ Discover little by little the mysteries that our protagonist hides. ☆
Chapters (33)
Did you mean "second"?
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Yes, sorry, I did not remember correctly hehe
This is an odd one. Very weird word choices. Which kind of kept making me stop to try and figure out what the character meant.
"The queen is." Rather than, "Is the queen?" to ask if the queen was dead. There are a bunch of little examples like that. It's just an odd translation. There are a lot of little examples like that. Usually with a story where the translation is a little off, it's not a big deal, you can follow everything pretty well. Like I said, with this one, I kept having to stop and think about it. It's kind of late and that might be effecting me. I'll give it another try tomorrow.
Monk
“Her hands were still bound with rope, she debated an escape before all the stupidity gave her an aneurysm.” -Scarheart
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Am so sorry, I use google translator, and some things don't translate well, mostly because of the Mexican "idioms" that I use, I know that Spanish translates better into English but I don't know Spanish, and this message probably has some grammatical error, but I'll see if i can fix it
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Don't ever apologies for being a writer. Someone who can sit down and create a world using nothing but words is a god. Never apologize for striving to be an Author. I feel bad because I said that I would give your story a second read and you were nice enough to respond to my comment. But I didn't do what I said that I would. I didn't honor my word.
I'm sorry and blame it on tequila which is the bane of my life.
Monk
“There are many ways to create a monster, and the one the girl knows best is rather basic: you tell someone they're a monster over and over again, then wait to see how long it takes before they agree with you.” -Estee
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Ok, thanks for making me realize, I'll be more careful with the translation :D
I like it. 👍
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Thank you, I work hard writing. :3
Good story my friend, I liked it.
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:3
For someone who clearly doesn't speak English as a first language, there aren't that many errors in the translation from Spanish. I got bored and corrected some of the worst.
I search for new stuff being updated all the time.... how has this slipped through my fingers!
I will read and give an honest review, I will be forgiving though since this is not your native language, I am just grateful that you are trying hard to make it readable for a lot more people. 
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Thank you so much 
I update more frequently in my Wattpad account, it's just in Spanish, I'll keep trying to translate more frequently. 
After reading it all the way through I find many errors and it is a little distracting, the worst ones are when you put the wrong sex on a character, but it is not always wrong so I know you try.
Also maybe instead of putting (thought) when someone is thinking you could do it like this instead and it would work better. Overall you do have a unique story plot and I enjoyed it very much, it would be great if somebody who spoke English better could help you more, but unfortunately I am too busy to do it or I would help you myself...
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Yes, it's a bit difficult, don't worry, in the chapter titled "dreams", I changed the writing format, to make it more understandable, I just haven't translated it yet hehe
You know, yours is the second story I have read an April fools chapter of today...... Still like the chapter even if it isn't real, it was funny.
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Will this story be a long one?
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Uf, Well, out of 100 percent we take maybe 10 percent, sooooo... yes, is so long the history