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Shining Armor: "Twilight, what stupid did you do this time?"
Finally some bimbo from you and I really liked the writing of this fic. By the way, is it my idea or is there a new fic from you every month?
nice work
Shining is definitely gonna make her sister ( Twilight ) regret that. 😏
Well, when hasn’t Twilight screwed anything up? It happens all the time.
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And she is supposed to be smart? How does she always get into this "messy situations". I mean look;
When did this happened!!??
And now this; Using Sombra's own horn to somehow make a Bimbo/Mind Corruption combo?
I think Twilight herself is highly SUS of secretly being a total slut. Even IF she "denies" it.
Because, all of these sexual situations she keeps making is a big coincidence.
Some very competently done tsundere: good work.
Excellent pacing and balance of caving and resisting which implies just how much she likes it.
Shining's kinda basic in this one, but whatevs, you made it work.
Since Twilight's in panic mode I assume she'll hold out just a little longer than the rest?
We need a prequel of this story, stat! Maybe two. Depends on the details.
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She’s secretly into it, I guess.
Incest and no Shakespearicles? What is the world coming to?
Holy fuck Barb has an ass on her in that pic.
Red alert, red alert, excessive horny detected.
Deploy the KGB Anti-Horny division. Send those fuckers to Horny Gulag.
Anyways, good story.
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wait for it...
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he hasent been on in 7 houres so i expect him to apper within a few days. or on the weekend
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Twilight is the perfect example of a d&d character with high intelligence and low wisdom
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Interestingly, she seems to take the optimized wizard route of having her second-highest roll in Constitution.
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And the funny thing is right even though this situation was used for good copies I can actually see Twilight trying to make another crystal heart and I mean main universe Twilight
Because Twilight in Canon even though she respects the power of magic she doesn't fully comprehend the damage magic can do example point of shadows
> tfw you get trapped in a castle with a bunch of soon-to-be sex-addicted bimbos
"Oh...oh noooooo..."
Thanks for chapter!
Have a good day!
Hoping Shining fertilized a batch of eggs in Barb! The Crystal Empire needs more heroes!
I just hope Shining Armor gets affected too and becomes an air headed himbo by the end that gets fucked repeatedly as karma.
Ok Buddy! DUDE!
I must say that it has been a long time since the last time I commented on any of your stories.
Fortunately, it's good that I'm back after a long absence.
I must say that the story caught my attention. Especially since you selected an image of Suirano, who for me is indeed one of the best MLP artists. Saying this, let us continue.
The idea of doing a story around Spike or rather, Barbara or Barb for short.
It is interesting that an "incest" is involved, since although Barb is adopted, he is not exactly a blood brother and we could not count it as incest, but, understandable.
In addition to that, I like the fact that you make Shining Armor a sex machine, considering that Cadence is an alicorn and the princess of love, I think you could have given Shining Armor a little more level.
But hey, the writer is you, and if you say that Shining is the dominant one, who am I to say otherwise.
The final scene in the bathroom is very erotic, I must say that you took it very calmly and made it look natural, which I personally liked a lot.
I think there is nothing more to say, except that I will eagerly await the next chapter, and if possible, I would like to contact you to find out if I could commission a story from you at some point.
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I think the joke is that he's already pretty much a himbo in canon.
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Ironically, I am writing Shining Armor's segments and my friend does call me a himbo.
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Because you are one, Towan. At least to me.
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You will have to wait and see. But Twilight is certainly going to do her best not to follow her slutified bodies needs and instincts...for now.
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It certainly won't be just fun and roses for him, although I would point out this is still intended to be a maledom story. So, I cannot promise that it will have "good" ending. Well, depends on what you would interpret as "good".
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Funnily enough, the initial idea for this story was just based on looking through Suirano pics and wanting to justify such bodies. So, yeah...that picture of Barb and her proportions is her actual look in the story. At least, we try to replicate that style.
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I recognize that pic; a fan of DarkGal?
...Or perhaps you've returned? Could be based on the writing style, if this was a collab.
Or maybe just wishful thinking. I hope they're ok.
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Wishful thinking, sadly. Though I did pick my avatar from one of DarkGal's stories (second one, I believe), 'cause I liked the picture and the story they used it for. In fact, DarkGal and some others have inspired me to write more seriously and influenced me heavily.
Been writing privately with Towan for some time, but I've been lurking on fimfiction before that. Its been his suggestion to start being more active here, currently through collabs with him. I've been involved with the Breakin In stories, for example.
This story is my first big project. Though, Towan is holding the reigns here, which is why he is publishing it.
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Ah well nice to meet you then, and keep up the excellent work! Perhaps we can collab down the road too; I've just recently gotten into writing here myself, and I've got some similar stuff in the pipeline. Depending on how busy work is, I should be able to submit something interesting to Dezmo's contest soon.
Reign holding? Kinky.
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I'm pseudo-interested.
Sorry, couldn't really get into this one, Shining Armor is too much of an asshole.
Necesitamos más historias de Barb
Sure, let's see where this goes.
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In that case, I'll follow you, your ideas are great.
nice work
Why do I get the feeling Starlight will play coy then zap Shining with the male version of the curse or something, to fulfill her own fetishes, and then probably go along with his plan for the same reason?
Cadance is the puppet mistress behind it all. No pony expects the dumb bimbo princess of thots.
You think? Just invite her to bed and all problem solved!
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Shining getting turned into even more of an Uber stud would be pretty hot, yeah.
Finally!!!!!
Someone did it! Someone finally did a Shining Cheating story... And a GOOD ONE!!!
I'm sooooo glad. Normally the people made something about orgy or change couples or something when Cadence agreed.
NO! this one is finally my dream come true! A story when Shining want and fuck every girls see one the back of Cadance.... And have fun with it :3
Pleae bring MORE! Especially Incest, I love that ones.
P. S. I wonder after this.... Adventure, Shining will be a father of MAAAAANY child's :3
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Uh… Cadence DID agree to it.
The open relationship part, at least. One-sided, but still.
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And we're supposed to root for this guy? XD
Hope that some mare uses a growth spell on him to make his dick and loads bigger, or shinny finds a growth potion to do that.
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Shining in this story is very much a protagonist. However, that doesn't mean he is good guy.
We are trying to ensure that things stay consensual, but him being a sexist jerk is absolutely intended. If it helps, that stance is nothing extraordinary in this setting and has less of an impact in Equestrian society, due to it being so female-dominated.
Shining does have standards, though. He isn't physically abusive and he doesn't enjoy it when ponies suffer. He is selfish, not sadistic. If a mare doesn't enjoy sex with him, he doesn't like it either. Although, if you were to ask him, he would likely just say its a "turn-off", rather than any moral objections.
Like I said, jerk. But one with a big dick.
nice work
Okay in all seriousness there's no way this version of shining armor would ever be able to back somebody like cadence in her eyes this shining armor would just be like another mindless jock who only thinks with that thing between their legs
And also I kind of want to see how this starlight if her magic was taken away because of her actions as a punishment
Thanks for chapter!
It honestly feels like there is a lack of information regarding wether keeping it contained or releasing it would be better.
If it only enhance what is already there plus their outside appearances then releasing it could be the better option rather than letting it build up? After all if it’s strong enough to change the environment around them then what’s to say that keeping it under pressure won’t make things worse? Or trigger some chain reaction that makes the area bigger than it would had been if left alone?
This is all under the assumption that the castle wards would eventually fail even if everything was done perfectly but again we have no way of knowing which one it is… Maybe it COULD be contained and they would be the only victims but who can say at this point?
Have a good day!
I wouldve thought Starlight would think of two things, given what she has stated and done prior.
The cuse is running back down their world lines and altering which way their history went to reach the present, so they have always been that way.
Barb is so magically resistant, so why not divert and dump the curse INto her, sort of like how Smolder got Cursed by the Caribou?
Bard that's evil...I fucking love it