I'm RevvEmUp, and I'm just starting to write for Equestria Girls. Been loving the format and user experience in FIMFiction so far.
After a disastrous adventure, Finn and Jake find themselves in Equestria, populated by colourful ponies, with Finn transformed into one too! After meeting the heroes known as the Mane 6, they get to know each other better, while something stirs in the Crystal Empire.
For Adventure Time: set after Come Along With Me. For My Little Pony: set after Season 7, but before My Little Pony: The Movie.
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Well, that's a solid start! I'd say the pacing could be a little slower to really sell some of the fight, and give the reader a bit more time to chew on the plot going forward! But otherwise, nice!
Misspelled "family" there!
Instead of "follows Finn" try something like "ran after Finn" as to not mix up past and present tenses.
Well looks like somepony's head-over-heels!
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Dang, there's always that one typo.
This made me laugh so hard XD
I think you have nailed the whimsical aspects of adventure time in this story! Keep it up!
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Thanks, my guy. I've been writing Adventure Time fanfics for years now, so I pretty much know how to write Jake and late-season Finn down for the most part.
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Very impressive! Love it so far! I'd love to keep chatting on a user page! You seem to have quite the writing experience :)
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I'll just take your positive review. I'm a little busy with other things to chat. I hope you'll enjoy the chapters to come.
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No worries! Looking forward to it!
More. MORE!!
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Then check out the other story of mine that I updated alongside this one. You'll find the connections as you read it.
I also have Adventure Time fanfictions on my Fanfiction.net, but this is the first one crossing over with My Little Pony.
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Bumble hunt, I assume?
I was referring to more adventure time stories.
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I just have one in the works, but that’s just it for now.
I'm sorry, but WHAT THE FUCK?!
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It's a segue into another fanfic I updated in tandem with this one.