When Wallflower Blush gets injured, Sunset Shimmer and Twilight Sparkle use the journal to talk about her recovery.
Written for the Twilight Files Contest.
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Not sure why that background scenery people insist is a character from Forgotten Friendship had to be part of this. Meh I guess?
Why is "and Twilight Sparkle" in italics, but not the rest of the synopsis?
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A cue that in the journal entries, Twilight's side of the conversation is in italics.
This was very sweet. I can't help but wish we also got to see events from Wallflower's perspective, too. Like, she literally got isekai'd, except she didn't actually die. I can only imagine her inner monologue. And also, was Discord present at her O&O game? If so, her reaction likely would have been priceless.
A very interesting premise. There are several stories where Sunset decides to return to Equestria, but very few, if any, where Sunset stays in the human world, and another character goes pony full-time instead.
Hmm...but even though Sunset has decided she belongs in the human world, the story's plot point seems to revolve around Sunset not using the portal at all during this entire encounter, which is kinda a plot hole. I mean, she couldn't take a day off and go through to help Wallflower adjust when she woke up, instead of being surrounded by total strangers in pony form? Or check up on her once and awhile? Or visit her after she decided to stay pony? Seems kinda unrealistic and out of character? Though, I get that it needed to be done for the journal-format to be unbroken through the entire story.
Definitely an interesting turn of events with Wallflower with her wishing to stay in Equestria and enjoying the life there. The inner conflict of Sunset with Wallflower's wishes was also a nice to read adding and realistic for me. After all, in Forgotten Friendship Wallflower was putting the blame in Sunset. The touch of sentences ending abruptly or the smileys etc. gave also the feel that Sunset and Twilight are "chatting".
I was wondering a bit how the family side of Wallflower had reacted to the accident or if anything regarding her family would be mentioned, but EqG was not the show that mentioned parents ever in the first place so I guess that works too.
Nonetheless, a nice, "self-finding" story with two characters writing with each other like friends would do
oof, definitely a darkly ironic way for Wallflower to end up in the hospital
ah that is interesting to think about, how going through the portal with injuries would even work. and that explains why pony Twilight is the one talking to Sunset here
yeah that is a lot to deal with on top of being hit by a truck!
well this makes me imagine just how many more human lives could be saved by sending them to Equestria to get magically healed
aww, but the fandom cutie mark is just way too fitting!
that does bring to mind a lot of questions about how cutie marks even work. shouldn't humans on the pony side be blank flanks?
yeah best not to think too hard about that one
yeah that is a bit clunky for a poem
i mean, could always track down pony Wallflower. wouldn't that be fun?
yeah that is not the best way to phrase it!
yeah there really are a lot of stairs in that thing
so true
hehe that does sound fitting
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aww sounds like she's not just fine!
that is very adorable
hehehe, yeah, Sunset won't get your Ponyville references Twilight!
well that just sounds very sheltered
aww, yeah, very relatable that Wallflower wouldn't want to go back
hehe, guess Sunset just instinctively considers herself a human now
aww, why doesn't she go over to Equestria and talk to Wallflower herself?
yeah that did seem very sudden, do wonder just what happened
aww yeah must be a lot to get used to again
yeah i'm not gonna think too hard about that one
oof that doesn't sound good!
aww, and yeah, Equestria is a very nice place so tolerance for that kind of thing might be lower, too
this is a cool scene to imagine! i do like the idea of Wallflower just really missing being an earthpony, and feeling even more off in her own skin than she even did before in the human world. just so poignant, augh
i do like this bit of HiE at a remove, with the common theme of Equestria being so nice and happy that it doesn't feel as real as struggling against everything that comes with being human
yeah Sunset is projecting her own ego here instead of thinking of how Wallflower feels and what she needs! she does need to let go of that streak inside of her
yeah you'd think Sunset of all people would be very sympathetic to Wallflower here!
aww yeah that is also definitely a possible motivator for her pushing away the place that made her happy
aww, truly the pony way!
and a nice note to end it on. glad that Wallflower found the place that she belonged! and very fitting that she and Sunset's journeys mirrored each other, in a way