This was very slightly confusing to read, because of there being three hippogriffs entering the scene at once, and only one of them is actually involved afterwards. Skystar seems irrelevant, and SilverStream doesn't seem to really be observing (and shouldn't either of the two notice Novo unbirthing a guard?).

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I kinda lost where I was going with this one. Having COVID kicking me in the head for the last week made me loopy. I'll probably go back through at some point and refine this one.

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Yeah, that's what I figured. COVID can really cause a sort of "brain fog". If you want, I'd be willing to help with a basic sorting out today, via messages; just send me a message and I'll be ready.

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Would be nice to have this chapter a little smoother. My attention is divided at the moment because I'm rebuilding my tribe's base on Ark Survival Evolved but having any assistance would be nice.

Not bad

when you going more chapters about this? there's more creatures like reformed changelings some worm thing and there's more creature that you can make more.

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I'm working on it. Been kind of distracted with trying to find a job lately though.