The big city seems to be pretty lonely. Even though Adagio Dazzle is on tour with her bandmates, something is on her mind. Her thoughts are centered on one person back home, but she finds it hard to pick up the phone to call her. One late night, Adagio decides to write a letter to her girlfriend, Sunset Shimmer, in an attempt to voice her feelings. Despite the lights and entertaining showcases in the city, a siren's heart longs for just one person, making Adagio finally pick up a pen.
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This story is supposed to just be a fun little oneshot to sink your teeth into before bed or such~ I came up with this story within an hour and I did this instead of sleeping. Either way, please enjoy!
I cry! is so beautiful!!
Simple, but good; I enjoyed this. To be honest, it was a little predictable, and I don’t really see Adagio in the character here, but I suppose that’s part of the AU tag. I don’t see either of those things as a real problem.
Good fic.
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Thank you so much and I'm glad you liked it~
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Thanks! I'm glad you like the story, as short as it is. I know it was predictable, but that's kinda where I was going to be honest~ I wanted something short and cute~ Also, you're technically right about Adagio not being in character here, but I suppose that's because I primarily write Adagio after some reformation. Either way~ I'm glad you liked it!
Capitalize 'the' after 'but...'
Amiss*
Want*
Odd*
Is*
Aww
Mistakes aside, this was a good one.
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Thanks for the compliment! I'm glad to hear you liked it~ As for the errors, I intentionally don't capitalize those words since they are carrying on the same sentence. Not a new statement. This may be grammatically incorrect, but it feels pretty off for me to capitalize a word when it's a part of the same sense. So, to avoid myself reading it wrong, I don't.
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Oh...
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Don't feel bad about it~ Multiple people have corrected me on things that they thought were mistakes that I intentionally did~
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Just try to help out with mistakes is all.
Super cute!!!! I like the idea of Adagio being too nervous to call her and I feel like she thinks sending a physical letter would make saying yes even more special!!! lol
Great work! Really enjoyed this!
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Thanks for the compliments! I'm really glad you liked this work, especially since I made it in one night when I felt super inspired~ I thought it was pretty special to see Adagio write a letter too~ In my mind, this is like the fourth time she's making the letter, just trying to get it right. All the while, she wants to talk to Sunset, but it's almost too daunting to. If you liked this work, maybe you would like some of the other Sundagio stories I have written~
Fluffier than Adagios hair.
Mmmm, cheesecake.
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Very true on both counts~
Huh, not sure how I missed this story… very good though
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It's alright to miss a few of my stories~ XD I'm not counting to make sure you comment on every fic I upload. But yeah! Thanks for the compliment~!