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Perfection
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Indeed it was
Maybe it gets better later on but after reading 1/3 of it I was disappointed. The start was abrupt without any buildup. Right to the dildos. Then it was just show of Dash being OOC with only a bit of hesitation that one would expect from her. And even that was misplaced after we get her in already sexual situation from the moment the story started.
Anon was written more annoying than funny. And I felt like he didn't really care to much for it[ Dash, sex etc.] beyond the 'dare'.
The clop part was well written but the story setup made it -at least for me- more then a bit bland.
Like i said earlier - maybe it gets better later in the story. But I could not find any motivation to read it to the end.
Oh my~ Rainbow dash definitely doesn't know when to stop when someone hurts her ego~
Absolutely fantastic
Dash is in character
The setup is great
And it's hotter than Hades
11.5/10
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Well these are certainly two different takes
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Most reasonable Fimfiction critic
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It's my own opinion.
I'm sure there are plenty of people who will enjoy it.
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Oh dude don’t worry I’m not like, angry or bothered with what you said.
I will humbly say I disagree with most of what you said, but again, it is your opinion.
Again, don’t sweat it! I know it’s your opinion!
This fic is amusing and so very sexy. Dashie doesn't get a break from all her orgasms. Anon is drenched in pussy juice. It's a bet where everyone truly wins! I like how devious Anon is too. Truly wonderful!
I'd love to see a pregnant sequel to this story sometime. Good chapter.
Picture source?
Comedy tag is a bit uncalled for. It is a great story.
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I wanted to ask the same thing
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Derp:2922053
glhf
Edit: at least its one of the versions
Ha, very well done.
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Absolutely agree with you
Absolutely love it, cannot wait for more!!!!
This story has made me want to
movejump the fence to Equestria and finger a mare's ponut.11333257
Seems like a good reason to go there
Great story, needs a sequel methinks
We need a pregnancy sequel to this wonderful story!
Well done!! Well done!!
I hope for a sequel!!
Heh, nice
Awesome
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Agreed.
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keep an eye out, you never know if or when I'll do one
Artist welost
This deserves a sequel