The Doctor lands on the outskirts of the Everfree Forest, where he meets a new companion before setting out on one of the most dangerous adventures of his life. Can he save Equestria from an ancient god and his follower? Can he get the TARDIS to work again? And can he fix his new friend's eyes? Find out in the first enstallment of Doctor Whoof!
(Sequel: Doctor Whoof: Time of the Hourglass )
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I like where this is going, but please, when you finish a chapter, go through and read it yourself. If your unsure about a word, look it up on the internet. You might even want a pre-reader. :ajbemuse:
Like I said, though, this has potential, so for now I track.
Oh, and it's prologue, with the "ue" at the end. That is all.
stupid emoticon. let's try that again:
My account on here is "Not" and I would be willing to edit for grammar and spelling. First error is the first word. You meant to use prologue. Also a consul is a group of people that decide things together. A console is something used to control other things using buttons and levers and such.
I was expecting "its smaller on the outside" lol I'm listing to too much doctor whooves. Lol, I like it so far
Wow! A story with two of my favorite characters, Discord and Doctor Whooves! Why hasn't this been done yet?!
So far this is interesting, your writing and grammar could use some work, but other then that I like it.
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Thanks for the feed back. I hope Part 1 will be a bit better, but if not
Wow, this got a lot darker then what I was expecting.
It was defiantly better written then the prologue, it seems you're improving.
I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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How has this not happened yet? Guess people didn't think it would be a good combination of characters. Thanks again, and happy holidays.
Thanks, and yeah... I thought that that tiny edge of dark material would help abit. Also, to your last comment,
Well, The Doctor seems to be so... relaxed... about his little predicament. Should he be relaxed? I thought he would at least panic for a while.
The ending seems a little rushed to me, like you just HAD to end it in a cliffhanger. But all in all, it was a good chapter. Just a little bit confused as to how Apple Bloom found the TARDIS. Anyway, just slow down. Don't rush you chapters too much and take your time.
Well, I was putting this and a handful of other stories off for far to long.
I'm glad I finally read it, it was a good, fun read. I think you captured Discord perfectly, one of the reasons I like him so much is he's just so fun to write. He's an awesome character and I really hope we see more of him in the future.
I think you rushed the last chapter a bit, you could have split it up and slowed it down just a tad. Sometimes filler is good!
And I'm wondering... Is this the tenth doctor or eleventh? I thought eleventh because of his love of fez's... But now I'm not sure because you did show a bit of the tenth's loneliness...
All in all, this was a fun story. Can't wait for the Doctor's further adventures in Equestria. I only have one thing to say,
Allons-y!
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. I guess it's a bit of a combination of ten and eleven, eleven because I like how Matt Smith plays the role and ten because David Tennon is awesome. In other words, I have no idea which he Doctor mine is.
You know, I never figured out which doctor (lol, witch doctor) I based this Doctor Whooves on either
And thanks for the compliment on Discord, I was a bit afraid that I'd mess up writing his parts. As for seeing him in future fics... We'll see
He wont be apearing soon (for obvious reasons) but I do have some ideas for him.
Well The Doctor seems to be taking this well!
Thanks for keeping Derpy as his assistant!
Also...
SOON.
discord is coming back right?
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Probably, I'm just not sure when.
So... this looks like you're setting it up for a sequel. Are you planning one?
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Way ahead of you man, link's in the description.
This was a really good Whooves fic, I gotta admit
If I had one criticism, it would be that it felt a bit rushed...
But it's all good, I'll move on to the sequel tomorrow
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i never watched doctor who that much i have seen a couple episodes so i do know of him this should be intresting and yay derpy is int the story she is my fav pony
poor twilight
btw your doin a good job pulling me into this story im glad i saw it
deroy is so sweet i wish she and everypony else was real
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Dont we all?
I want to read your series of Doctor Whooves fanfics but there is one thing I need to ask before I start reading this. Which Doctor did you use for your Doctor Whooves of?. I hope it's the 10th Doctor you based Doctor Whooves of.
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It's hard to say, because he acts a bit like 10 and 11 at times, but in the cannon Who-niverse he's 11. But I hope that doesn't change your opinion on reading the series
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No it doesn't, I like Smith but I just prefer Tennant over all.
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Understandable, Tennant was a great Doctor. I think that they changed Smith's version so much to counter balance the cool nerd and nerdy nerd sides of the two.
208761 run off sentence much? Just kidding, or am I? Muwahaha!
John: George! Stop terrorizing the users!
Love it. Goin to read the rest!
Love the blubbery muffin!
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Deroy???
I thunk smiths version of the doctor is more fun because of his randomness. Bowties are cool, Stetsons are cool, fezzes are cool.
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and it gets interesting.
So i heard you like muffins. Also sounds like Discord became a hero after all. Nice
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Kinda... He's more of a fun loving guy who just doesn't want to hurt ponies at this point. A little bit of a hero. Glad you liked it.
wait hold up about 2 chapters back it said that applejack had sent spie to canterlot not Appleoosa
other then that and the various grammatical error id say this is a pretty legit story very nice work
wait isent Discord in there with him?