• Member Since 3rd Jun, 2021
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Thyt3


Comments ( 19 )

I came here automatically expecting to downvote this, but it was after reading it it was actually pretty funny! Gross, immature, but strangely hilarious!

Congratulations for scarring my life.

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Then why did you read it in the first place?

11312583
Well excuse me if my story is that bad. I'm trying okay? This is my first time actually posting content.😕

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it's not bad. It is meant to be degusting. Because that's how we are post to feel when a person takes a dump. If I was in a bathroom with another women it would be very awkward. Public bathrooms and watching them would be super awkward. (if you do this in real life you might go to prison for stalking them.)

The fiction is not bad is what I'm saying but many people think it's disgusting because poop is involved.

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Oh okay, so what do think of my story overall?

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Well to tell you the truth I can't judge it yet on incomplete fictions.

for me i think it's a 4/10 but it is meant to be because it's a poop fiction so >.> ussually it's common to have 2/10 - 4/10 range.

If your trying to get people to feel uncomfortable and disgusted that rating range would be at least a 6/10.

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I'm 100% that you shouldn't place this fiction in any clop place besides the toilet group place. That's where all the watersport fictions goes. and they do get a lot popular if they go in there sometimes. just to give you a good place where to put it.

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By the way what's the group called? I tried searching it but nothing came up.

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I'll send you a dm on it. Due to I don't want people to go there just to kill the place.

:ajsmug:

I can imagine rarity having a bladder bulge with that maid outfit on

Why is Rarity dressed like a maid in the cover art?

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It's the cover I chose.

11312888
Plus someone else made it

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