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YES! AN UPDATE!
Edit: You mean Chapter Nine?
P.s. FluffPuff. REALLY!?
This story needs some Aria / Shadowbuck romance
I loved the part with the fortune telling, really took me by surprise.
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Glad you like it. I rewrote the entire second half after the balloon scene so I was pretty nervous about it.
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Thanks for pointing out the Author's Note error. Hope you liked the chapter and I like to add humor into my story so yes, Flufflepuff. Pfft!
Oh this was a good one. Really hope Aria doesn't end up becoming a destroyer like that though. Hope Tekish is wrong.
Amazing chapter. Destroying the world may end up meaning destroying the destroyed world, effectively repairing it or something like that.
FLUFFLPUFF!
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Destroying something that's already destroyed equals fixing it? Wouldn't it just be like breaking it into even smaller pieces?
2693291 Easier to remake I guess.
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Precisely, but with a more automatic connotation.
I finally came around to reading your story and have to say it is really pleasant to read although I sometimes have to wonder about what you were thinking. How would Aria know that to react to the situation the way she does.
the most recent event like that, and I only read to chapter Eight, because the version I downloaded hadn't had chapter Nine (wich tells you how long ago i downloaded, and haven't read it)
anyway, the scene... yeah:
How would Aria know about the Enclave and their treatment towards Dashites?
I mean she kinda know about the cloudcover always being there, but as far as I can recall the Enclave was never mentioned.
It's an easy fix, one paragraph after she saw the Enclaves armor and stuff
"This is the 'Enclave' Shadowbuck told me about when I asked for an overview of the current state of Equestria, blah blah..."
She's fully capable of knowing but it's never explained why she knows, so it seems a little weird. ^^"
and the fortune telling is totally not ripped off reaper, is it?
anyway, I faved it, I thumbed it up and I featured it on the wiki,
but now I actually wrote I like it, so one more happy costumer
keep up the good work!
I AM DEATH, DESTROYER OF WORLDS.
What was going through my mind when Tekash started his star maiden rant.