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Oh, hey new chapter... and it's really big... You just hate my spare time don't you? And to think I was supposed to be working on my own story. Ah well. I know what I'll be doing tomorrow morning.
Ok, so I squeed at the sight of a new chapter so what?! BTW im gonna have to read later. sorry.
good chapter again I must say and I hate how she mind raped Aria like that
Longest chapter so far!
1793146>>1780953 Yep! If you take away the Prologue, that's five chapters at 100k words. I've averaged just over 20k words a chapter. Not quite FO:E later chapters or FO:E-PH chapter level, but I think that's pretty impressive/a lot of work for my pre-reader, Chimpso, and me. So I hope everyone enjoys reading it because I enjoy writing it and put a lot of effort into it. Already 5k words into Chapter Six, so hopefully this'll be done before the 3ish week mark.
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Don't worry about trying to be at FoE level. That's a very hard goal to attain.
I need more sleep. For about a minute I was off in la la land, and I thought I was on the show.
It didn't make much sense.
I think Aria is female.
1796277 That's in reference to Golden Star from the first line of dialogue. I'll change His to Golden Star to clear up confusion.
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I guess I was wrong.
I like this fic is about as much as "FoE: Memories" at this point. It's really getting good.
1810882 Thanks, and don't worry. Aria will start fighting in the next chapter, have her big break down and break through, and will have a reason to keep going in the Wasteland. Just wait, you're going to see some VERY interesting developments for all of our main characters next chapter.
1814523 She's a dark brown on my screen and I'm guessing Serenamidori's too. Maybe your screen resolution's a little off? On my iPhone certain colors change from what they're supposed to be. Bluish purple tends to show up either a dark purple or blue, but not the actual color. Maybe that's what's going on.
Current Chapter:
Shouldn't there be a 'shouldn't' instead of a 'should'?
Fitting and catching build-up for the mindrape-scene. My thought-process before it happened: "Oh noez. This reads like an incoming rape-scene. But settle yourself down, Zirno, you aren't reading Project Horizons. This author will definitely not rush down such a dirty pipe so fast. … Or will he?" – After the scene: "Darn. I believe it wouldn't be so heart-wrenching, if it have been actual rape. This would have been only pointless and emotionally disconnecting form the narration. But this is really sad. I want to hug Aria so much and tell her everything will be alright."
Thus, Pallydan: Nice twist on my expectations, which is craftily executed. I like it from an aesthetic standpoint.
Also: I'm loving Check's antics, her caring character and herself as a whole.
1858476 First off, thanks for pointing out the mistake. Doesn't matter how many times my pre-reader or I read through, some things just slip right in. Also, thank you for your kind words about the 'mind rape' scene. I was worried people would be turned off by it, but it's important to the story for two major points, one coming up in the next chapter and one later on. Finally, I'm glad you like Check, she was actually the hardest pony for me to come up with and to write for. But don't worry, you'll see a lot more of her really soon.