Page generated in 0.033 seconds
Total duration
746 users online
1,131,187 hits today, 2,561,572 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Mandopony? I love it.
I must say, you really have me hooked. When this first came out it was ok, but now it's great!
Um, as much as I love Doctor Whooves, I am refusing to accept this as story canon. I'm sorry. This chapter is awesome but that part made me loose credibility to the next chapters.
Wow, a fic with an appearance of the Doctor that isn't centered on him or otherwise really poor quality?
That is pretty cool. I'm not much of a fan of that series, but I like the universe as a whole ok.
I have yet to see any fic not make him a main character and the story still be good at the same time, but you did it.
I say, well done.
Another brilliant chapter.
2699327 You do know that the Doctor is canon for FO:E, right? Jokeblue and Homage had an adventure with him. Homage told Littlepip the story of it, but we as the reader only got the end of the story.
2699327
Nothing is Canon. Everything is Permitted.
The scene with Littlepip and Homage I screamed wrong. It made me lol. Anyways good chapter again liked it .
2699788 well then I must have missed that huge plot hole.
What... no, what... just... what... just... you... -starts to hyperventilate-
Let me start again. -calm breaths now please- Let me get something straight. I thoroughly enjoy your story. It's obvious you put a lot of thought into character and plot development. The story was going simply GREAT until that ONE event. I'm sorry to say but that ONE thing kind of broke the story a bit. And no, it wasn't the Doctor, it was the way he was introduced that really got me. Mind me, this is strictly my point of view and no one has to share it. In my mind, a Fo:E story just can't have a rescue THAT miraculous and by SUCH a powerful character (you know, since he is a time traveler and whatnot). The rescue, (again in my mind) should have been made by someone else and certainly not by a tardis. I believe the Doctor should have been introduced gradually, only later reveal himself as a timetraveling-tardisowning-gentlestallion. -pulse stabilising at normal levels- Aaaaand finally after those harsh-ish words and (from your perspective probably horribly useless) words of insight, here's some praise. The story is coming on very nicely, and I'd like to say that I eagerly await each chapter. Keep up the damn good work.
writing with mixed feelings-
~janekfan
2722021 It's alright. Thank you for your input. It seems that Doctor Whooves' appearance is pretty controversial, but I assure you that he is, while important to the plot, not a main character or supporting character. This is not the last time he will show up, but he's a mysterious time traveler and has a reason for just showing up and helping Aria. Please stick around for Chapter 10 and 11 for an explanation and some serious plot advancement. We're almost to the halfway point of the Trottingham Arc.
Having just stumbled upon and read this story i can only say one thing, I can see this story getting big. In general the writing quality is good, the charicters engaging/memorable and the hints and history throughout the story make for an interesting read.
This leaves me wondering where this story will go and what is going to happen. So bravo!
3046050 Thanks, although I don't know what you're talking about her knowing what a Dashite is. She literally asks the Enclave ponies about the brand and what a Dashite is during the encounter. She doesn't even call the pegasi Enclave until after they talk about the Grand Pegasus Enclave. I hope that clears stuff up for you.
3046339
just generally how Aria reacts to some situations
She reacted to the situation of Enclave-pegasi trying to unrightly brand a pegasus as an Dashite.
Normally it would take a while to process information, especially in the heat of the moment like this clearly was, so in the situation of being shot and incapacitated, she should only see some pegasi trying to torture her friend for no apparent reason. She seems to rational about it, almost as if she had already known about the Enclave and their treatment of Dashites before.
This was going great, going better... then things got a bit too supernatural for my taste and then the Doctor happened.. and the story lost the last of its credibility to me..
Not to say its badly written or anything but I like to read the Fo:E genre for a good survival story with a fair bit of gore and emotions... NOT for science fiction. At this point there has been so much supernatural deities introduced and now a time traveler in a darn blue box, I just cant get a feeling anymore for the importance of the actual main characters when they are being escorted by an army of immortals.