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Awkward.

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Solar Sail is lost, drifting on the seven seas in his life boat. He doesn't have much time left, but that's never stopped him before. While he sails slowly towards his inevitable end, Luna is working in her dreamscape. It's not as easy as she makes it look.

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I wanted to write a story inspired by "Papagayo: The Mischief Maker". This hardly does the original justice, but it's neat to think about. Papagayo's stories are a fun little creation legend for kids, and it holds a permanent spot in my brain! Along with a ton of nonsense from Rudyard Kipling. Hmm... Maybe I can write more like this.

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“You think you can just come over here? I’m a monster hunter you know! I fight sea monsters for fun!”

Sure, the sea monster had won, and Solar hadn’t exactly hunted it, but one fight should count for something, right?

I love this guy.

Solar was sick of this. He didn’t want any more strange halucinations. He wanted to be back hime, ...

As Solar’s shadow stretched across the ocean ad into infinity,

I found a couple typos.

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I mean, you don't end up adrift in a place called "Tirek's Toilet" because you make good decisions. Let's be real here. Thanks!

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Refresh your page! I fixed a bunch. I copied the wrong version... But it should be fixed! Thanks for letting me know, though!

Oh this was good, had me sitting at the edge of my seat. I especially love your take on the tantibus.

Solar is friggin' awesome. Very nice!

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