While experimenting with new spells, Princess Twilight and Starlight Glimmer died when a spell backfired with fatal results. Due to a screw-up in paperwork, the pair's spirits were called to Hell.
Unfortunately, it was beyond Devil's power to send Twilight and Starlight to their rightful place in Heaven. Until God could eventually get them, they had no choice but to suck it up and settle into their new home.
However, one of them got a little carried away with making the best of their situation...
Chapters (2)
Well now, this is interesting. I don't suppose you were inspired by the delightful duology of Best Hell Ever! and Heaven of a Hell, were you?
Also, HOW DARE you put Derpy's grandfather in Hell?! There WILL be retribution!
Really interesting premise, looking forward to know what discord saw
This is super cool!
Oh shit, what happened now?
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I wasn't directly inspired by them since I thought of the idea of the story on my own, but I might have been subconsciously inspired by them. Twilight and/or Starlight being in hell is just ripe for mayhem.
But of the best retribution, I would suggest sticking Derpy on me and forcing her to be my maid or something. I will regret everything after a few weeks, a few months tops.
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Glad you're enjoying the story so far!
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You will find out in a few days. The second/last chapter is written and is in the middle of being edited.
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Just look at what happened to Job...
In the description, "heaven" should be capitalized as it refers to a specific location.
The existence of Recording Angels implies that there is
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Thanks for pointing it out and I fixed it. I had the "H" capitalized in the story, but forgot to do it in the long description. Go figure
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I have a number of Pet Peeves in language. One is using "infer" when you mean "imply". Another is not capitalizing God, Satan, Heaven, Hell, etc.
This is the 2 story of Twilight in hell I have readed, And I got to say that Twilight got to be the one and only thing the Devil fears
I prefer the term dedicated potential lover.
Like she’d ever show any affection to YOU Sombra.
that was funny
Oh maybe she should get moving on that special friendship curriculum for her former student and her friends!
*gasps for air* Mercy! I can't breathe! Too much... laughing!
After reading yet another case of good idea but awful everything else, and yet another comment from "white knights" defending a writer that took the lazy way out, this is exactly what I needed.
Thank you!
Oi. Dragon Ball called. They called dibs on that last one. Maybe not perfectly. But still.
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She just might be
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With how close they have gotten, I wouldn't say you're wrong, though Twi is facing stiff competition from Trixie, Sunburst, and maybe Maud.
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I liked it too.
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Twilight's reaction to Cozy whenever she shows up might be a little different than what that little adorable mastermind would expect...
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Glad you liked the story!
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Glad someone finally called out that Dragon Ball reference.
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Out of all of them, Sunburst might be the only real competiton to worry about given he’s Starlight’s obsession.
Trixie annoys Starlight more often than not and Maud barely interacts with her.
What the hell have you done, Twilight?
This story was too funny for me to do anything but LAUGH😂
Poor Sombra, forced to endure those friendship speeches
Poor Ex-Devil!
Poor Princess Celestia...
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Glad you liked the story!
It's not often I feel bad for Sombra, but this is one of the times I did
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I look forward to seeing how you handle most stylish filly, when you inevitably get around to it.
LoL, this is amazing.
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That was one of my favorite paragraphs of the whole story.
Wouldn't the Devil in Equestria be named Haydes?
I'll see myself out.
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I'm going to have to see myself out for not thinking of naming Devil "Haydes" myself!