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Let's make a musical!

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After a long day of busting flanks at the Wonderbolt Academy, Captain Spitfire is looking forward to a nice calm evening of domestic bliss. A home cooked meal, an attentive girlfriend and their son having finished his homework, she finds none of those things but life is pretty good anyway.

This was my entry in the L contest of the Quills and Sofas' Pride Month series of speedwrites.

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Comments ( 12 )

I love this for the premise alone!

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Thank you, that means a lot.

This was an enjoyable one shot.

They named their kid Blackbird G. Starfighter. They're either the parents you always wanted or the parents you already had.

This was awesome and silly :trollestia:

Edit: Reading this again later...

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Like Spitfire wasn't going to name her kid after a fighter jet, and Gilda would escalate. :raritywink:

Somehow I'd like to see the girls beating up some other dad(s) causing trouble xD
Bar fight!!

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Great idea. You don't mess with these two.

Not a bad story.
Very slice of life and that's cool.
Needs a good edit but I'd like to know more about their relationship. 😷 sounds fun and complicated.

Interesting premise that paid off surprisingly well. Characters created an interesting dynamic and a lot of story is established without saying a lot. Very well done.

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