The Era of Aracana, a time period ruled by power. Society does not need the weak and unable, they need the strong and capable. This is what they believed.
Twilight was deemed weak and cast out at a young age. She had to fend for herself, doing whatever it took to survive. Now, she's on the run from the law, being constantly being chased form town to town. Her bitterness grows and grows by the day for those who abandoned her. Sick of living in constant turmoil, she is now on a journey to tie up loose ends.
Sex tag for innuendos, raunchy comments, and mentions of the act. Violence tag for, obviously, violence. Gore tag for mentions of blood and injuries. Profanity for rowdy language. Rating may change as story progresses.
Chapters (3)
Interesting premise! Looks good so far; I’ll definitely be watching it!
Hmm. Can't wait to see where a semi evil twilight goes. Maybe sorceress queen?
Interesting, interesting. Let's see what happens next.
It is fluid and sprinkles the story amidst the action, it certainly holds potential in it. I believe the determining factor will be the pacing and the thematical focus (making it more about feelings and internal struggle all of a sudden may make certain viewers that were expecting more action and drama disappointed, though sprinkling it certainly makes a good mix) rather than world-building or characterization, since the reader can kind of try to picture what is happening, leaving some mystery open.
Either way, I liked it for now and will track it. Good work making it.
My interest is piqued.
“The weak will be purged, and the strongest will thrive -- free to live as they see fit"
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Thank you!
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You'll just have to wait and see!
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I started this story mainly because I wanted to something more action focused, but decided that I wanted to, as you said, sprinkle in some internal struggles because I feel that could possibly make the character more relatable/realistic. I will try my best to keep the pace just right!
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Awesome to hear!
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Wise words by Steven Armstrong.
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It says he slept. So, did Twilight actually help the guard, or did she do something else? I’ve got quite a few ideas running through my head. First and foremost, I think it would be best if we are shown that Twilight still has some care and passion for those who represent what she desires out of the world. She wanted those who would stick to her come hell or high water, and didn’t get that. If she was completely cold to the world, then she was the opposite of her own ideals.
The reason why I’m not sure if that’s what you did were the following words.
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Not to spoil too much, but Twilight isn’t completely cold to everypony. I plan to explain her backstory slowly over the course of the story. Also to answer your question, she just put him to sleep.
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Completely understandable. To confirm, she did help his eyesight?
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Yes, she did
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Aight! Just had to confirm that bit, it wasn't clear.
I find it funny there is never a smart leader to bandits always some meathead there Finds a way to get himself and his Followers killed
I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
Great chapter mate!
Twilight seems to be magnet for idiots
Ooh, what DID Blueblood do I wonder? Quite the interesting mess our very capable Twilight found herself in.
intersting, cant wait to see whats she is gonna do to Blueblood
Interesting story. Looking forward to reading more. Added to read list.
I really hope this story would be update again 😁
I hope this is not dead.