Applejack might have messed up when she told Roseluck that flowers were for sissies. How can she apologize to the mare she cares about most?
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Ah, yes, the leasbeans! Love AJ's character in this one, and the little details of Roseluck as well, and the flowers! I just love flowers in general Awesome work!!
Being friends with Rarity, you'd think Applejack would learn to keep her mouth shut when it comes to scathing comments on anything frou-frou
She handled it pretty well though, both direct in her apploogies and her insults.
The very cutest. I love Applejack's characterization. You can tell it's her long before her name is actually mentioned, without relying on charming country-isms.
Just very, very cute overall. Very real, too. It all felt natural and not too grandiose. Write more!
Okay I loved this and will their be a sequal maybe or a follow up with them adopting or taking care of a child hmmm
The way that certain types and colors of flowers are giving off a message sounds like something that could be expanded upon. Like, an entire story dedicated to the "flower language." I loved that part of the story.
This was brilliant. One of those ships that I never would've come up with in a hundred years myself, but at the same time makes absolutely perfect sense and feels absolutely natural.
Imagery thoughout was excellent, too. I liked how you incorporated poetic visuals and metaphors, but did so from the very down-to-earth, country-folk like way that Applejack logically would. Made it super easy to buy the narrative voice as AJ.
love that from the phrases alone you know it’s Applejack without having to say it or write an accent. takes skill to do!
extremely Applejack in literally every way, amazing. i can’t think of a more Applejack way or reason to hurt the feelings of the mare she loves
dang that must be a deep red!
aww! so romantic while being rooted in apple-related imagery, damn this is great work
ahaha that is so Applejack
so true
smooth, AJ!
augh! first time i’ve ever seen the ship (well except for the first time i read this forever ago) and damn do i love it. you do such an amazing job in so few words, giving Roseluck a strong characterization while doing some of the best Applejack writing i’ve ever seen. excellent stuff! i am honestly super jealous and wish i could write like this