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SOUNDBLASTER_SUPERIOR
He who controls the flow of information, controls the flow of battle. SOUNDBLASTER SUPERIOR. PONIES INFERIOR.
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Good choice of the power ice magic
Noice
Very intresting i like it can't wait for more
Theres no why I look away for 5 minutes and a chapter is out already jesus christ. Gonna read that now.
EAT THE FURNITURE FOR STRENGTH
Celestia may have the biggest moon but Luna has the greatest one.
I loved it and honestly i want him to impregnate Celestia regardless of any anti-impregnation spell. Maybe it is one of the "gifts" Master and Crazy hand gives to him (if you get my reference then tell me and everyone what it is, lol). Keep up the good work
Eh, I much more preferred him as a hot dog.
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I’ll think about it
Excellent work keep it up
great work
11302742
Thank you for saving me from wasting my time
I only hope that the lightning comes with drawbacks.
Nothing major, just standard things like if he uses it while in water it affects him.
And it NEEDS a static drawback where every time he uses it he goes full-on fluff ball.
seeing the first picture I had flashbacks to my "Werewolf: The Apocalypse" is that hispo or glabbro?
as for the story only 1 chapter in will need to continue to really judge, but good enough to continue imo.
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seeing how ice powers made his internal body temp drop its unlikely
11304159
I’ll think about it
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Hey that’s not nice!
11302742
Do you really have to be so judgmental? At least try my other stories
Woooow. Okay, so you’re one of those folks that doesn’t want comments. Noted.
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It’s not that I don’t want comments, it’s just that I don’t appreciate people taking a big steamy dump on something I work hard on!
11306893
I didn’t dump on anything. I said, basically, “Hey, this specific facet of your writing is unnecessarily confusing to readers, here’s why, here’s a suggestion on a way to fix it going forwards.” I used a couple writing-specific terms that maybe you didn’t know, but ten seconds on google would resolve that.
If you consider actual constructive criticism to be “a dump,” you’re never going to improve, and that vote ratio up there? It’s not gonna improve, either. Shoot, I didn’t even touch on the content (in an effort to avoid “dumping,” in fact) just the craft. If simply pointing out improved mechanics is a bridge too far, heh, well then.
If you’re gonna delete anything that isn’t either sycophantic praise or idle chitchat between readers, then you literally don’t want comments. And ya know what? That’s fine. You do you. Refrain from deleting this one and maybe folks will see it and leave fewer for you to deal with.
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Did you really have to give a whole lecture?
Why does the mc act like he has been a dog his entire life? He has his memories and experiences from his years of being human yet he is shown to throw all of that away the first chance he gets to act as a simple-minded canine.
I understand that his instincts have changed due to his new body but he doesn't even try to keep his human composure.
It would've been interesting to see the collision of his human dignity and his new body's instinct with him struggling to stay human in the foreign body, a fight for dominance in his own mind.
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Uuuuuhhh……..
Where’s the next chapter?
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Working on it, it’s taking a while. I’ll have it ready when it’s ready so keep your shirt on.
Fluttershy knows what a werewolf is? Does Equestria even have lycanthropy?
I'm going to guess at the Mickey Mouse gloves are Discord.
I just hope this doesn't turn into a self insert power fantasy.
I am disappointed. I want to see Arctic use his lightning abilities outside of his pupsicle form and fluff up from the static.
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I will if you can think of a situation where it calls for it
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He only practiced his ice powers. He did not train his lightning. Reason given, including cause for friendly mockery from Luna, when her turns from Shock-Doggo to Fluffy Puffball.
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I meant a reason to use his lightning powers, I can't do anything unless he has a reason to use them, and why he's using them.
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Training. It would be better to learn how to use it in an environment where Luna can contain any excess loss of control, than to be in a combat scenario and have his lightning arc towards a guards armour, instead of the intended target.
Wait a minute...
Warewolf, ice powers...
Is he a Lunagaron!?
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I don’t even know what that is
Lightning and Ice powers?
Did Zinogre and Lunagaron had a baby!?
Hopefully there'll be many puppies in his future.
More good
Unbirthing = scat, watersports and foot fetish.
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Unbirthing does not equal scat!!!! And watersports is urine! What is wrong with you?! I don’t do that stuff in my stories!!!!
I kind of want the prank to involve his new bitches to join him in there while Celestia's asleep.
Either this was a typo or more happened than we know about
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Celestia’s phoenix. That’s the fourth pet.
Interesting.~
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Oh boy… I mean it’s not like they are already living in a monarchy which historically has down everything to protect the nobles…