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EvilNaab


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Spitfire struggles with her feelings for a while now for a certain mare and she will have the chance to admit it or not.

Once again a lots of thanks to LulamoonSparkle for editing, correcting/rewriting english mistakes and making it way better.

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Comments ( 5 )

Lovely little story, I enjoyed reading it.
A few mistakes here and there but nothing serious or unreadable. Could have been somewhat longer, but then again, that's always my problem whenever I like a story.
One question though...do they eat anything else besides sandwiches? :rainbowlaugh:

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They probably do, so I'm sorry i didn't come up with anything else, but i'm glad you liked it.

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Nothing to be sorry about. It's your story after all, so you decide what they eat.
It was just funny to read about them eating sandwiches all the time....oh and ice cream.

My kind of story. Good ol' fashioned SpitfireXRainbow Dash. Can't wait to read:ajsmug:

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