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Plumicorns


drawer of pichurs, writer of stories, enjoyer of birds

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Dusty Clouds is a simple pegasus. She wakes up, she eats, she robs a bank with her posse, and then she sleeps.

One day, after what seemed to be a normal heist, Dusty finds a member of her crew has been captured by the sheriff. Upon going back to retrieve her, Dusty is apprehended by royal guards. She finds herself whisked away to Canterlot, where she meets Princess Twilight. Twilight tells her she has been chosen to act as a guinea pig for the new Criminal Reformation and Acclimation Program. She is far from interested, but she finds she has little choice in the matter. To make matters worse, she is stripped of her magic and partnered with the most annoyingly peppy pink unicorn. They have to learn to work together in order to get back what they lost and regain their freedom, and perhaps find something else along the way.

NOT beta read, we die like my free time.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 30 )

This is for interest for sure to me, i got a love for wild west and Bandits.

...more so after a friend's oc became a Favorite of mine, who's a wild west Bandit actually...:twilightsheepish:

Feels like a good start! Looking forward to more!

sounds interesting.... looking forward

Kind of unexpected to see "indignance" used instead of the more common "idignition". Intriguing.

Cute pic and nice to see her have Standards

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Thanks! And yeah, we only pay with legally obtained candlesticks here :trixieshiftright:

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I've always loved the Wild West as a setting, too. Who doesn't love a good bank heist a la Bonnie and Clyde? Or a good old fashioned sherriff vs outlaw desert police chase? Those are always so much fun!

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Youre welcome and me too.

Sorry if my mentioning of the friend's oc was unfitting or anything, old habit

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If you want to hear more, be my guest

welcome to the Criminal Reformation and Acclimation Program

Sounds like a load of C.R.A.P. to me XD

Very nice art! And pinke, what else to expect?

Enjoy your vacation!

And Pardon if I Sounded unfitting with my comments

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Youre welcome.

And sorry if it was unsuiting, it just got me cirious how far dusty goes as Bandit/if she has any Standards/honor as criminal

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You're alright! She definitely has standards, but honor not so much. Honor is not a luxury one can afford when you're doing what you can to survive. Lying, cheating, stealing; its all the same to her. She definitely wouldn't purposefully hurt anypony, though, and she certainly cares for her reputation.

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Of course. With honor, i meant not hurting innocents and such. Not the kind who kills without hesitation to achieve her goals.

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I made some art for this chapter :)

I really like Dusty's manic energy in the picture.

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I suppose this is not what this particular fic is about, but I could easily imagine a different type of character go, of course I have friends. I'm best buds with the other bandits back in our secret lair. It's this reformation nonsense what's keeping me away from them. Can't wait to get it over with and return to do all sorts of criminally fun stuff together.

nice t o see this updated, nice job!

Welcome back! Nice to see an update =)

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