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Kill it with fire!
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Praise it with thumbs up!
Hmm... interesting... I've never came across a coltcuddler fic....ehh What the hell. Your book has gained my attention to review well I'll begin as soon as I have the time. Ciao~
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Ha. That is all
The story isn't really that bad. The grammar is decent and all. Though I do have to say that I really am a strong supporter of ShiningCadance. I think maybe Shining Armor is actually a little bisexual.
I say: фу блять фу нахуй
Decent idea ruined by fragments. I can get over one or two, but fuck, this is absolutely filled with them. Also:
Where the fuck are your commas dude? There are no pauses there, it reads like a robot speaking.
Interesting, but too soon to give an opinion. I'll watch this for now and see what happens in later chapters.
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fixed... never did noticed that...
was bound to happen
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If you are writing in Russian on an English-speaking web site, try at least spell correctly (check this).
1306238 Just get someone to edit this and it will be like 500% better.
You've got my attention. Fav'd.
Aww dont listen to them, this story's gonna be great (not a fan of gay armor though)
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i think i better know how to write in my language, thank you
All right chap Finished chapter 1. First is setting: Out in Ponyville and my guess first was on the out skirts of ponyville near the EverFree Forest, after that The main land of Ponyville probably near the podium near the bridge. Very well on setting not a mixture of differentiated spots on one chapter,no. Now in Character, Since this is a foreshadowed "clop" fic and I have never before came across a coltcuddler version. Usually I stumble upon a fillyfooler but this is different and that this is a soiree of Big Mac' and Shining Armor as the main character so I'm a bit disturbed. But nevertheless, I must critique~. Now on the Witches Hat, It's pretty flat for the beginning of a chapter, But That's Good! it's only the beginning. Now last but not least plot. In this I see that he must simply check the border line of Ponyville and the Everfree and well now a downpour has begun so he finds shelter fairly quickly. and here are the question that arouse while reading.... what is Big Mac' doing in a cottage? Is it Fluttershy's cottage? Why would'int Twilight leave a spare key for her library and finally why does Shining Armor have short-term memory loss on Twilight's friends? But all in all fairly....fine chapter. I expect a bit of an improvement in the next chapter. Good day to you~
P.S What ever tickles your peach~
Bah. A potentially great idea ruined by technical errors. If you're not going to edit, don't bother writing.
I'm not for Shining Armor cheating on Princess Cadence(dude, she's a princess and hot by pony standards) unless Cadence either gets off on him cheating(aka she likes to watch), she is okay with it, or she wants to join in. Not going to read, but I am NOT going to down vote.
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Its like yaoi, but with ponies.
i read the comic....so yeah....
Sorry, but some characters are just simply off limits to me when it comes to "I think I'm going to be gay now for no discernible reason". Shining Armor is one of those characters. Seriously, even when the show announces that a character is heterosexual (Rarity, Cadance and Shining Armor to be specific), you go and make them gay anyway. Not down voting, but not going to read. I have standards, such as keeping canon and logic in a story.
(I don't hate M/M fics, just the ones that don't make sense.)
i like on how the likes and dislikes are racing against each other
I'm sickened but curious
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I take it you know where the cover pic came from...
*sees pic*
*looks at name*
*sees sex tag*
*sees characters*
an gay clop?wtf?still curious!
I came in here just to say...media.desura.com/images/members/1/320/319529/an_hero.jpg
Something that's constructive criticism...
Try not to shift between present and past tense. It gets really annoying to read to a lot of readers. Also, try building it a little more than it already is in terms of character and setting and such.
Needs a good proofreading, but other than that...
Ohhh yeah, liking this. Really wish there was more M/M stuff in this fandom. And I don't much care for the 'it's not canon' complaints - fanfics are vicious assaults in canon in general, Shining wouldn't be the first married spud to get some rough trade on the side, and him cheating on his wifey just adds delicious drama potential and naughtiness.
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Ya know what? This personally might be the only Male on Male Fic I've read on FimFic, but already I like the idea and am somewhat aroused despite being straight...I THINK at least.
Still, I see no reason to dislike this and hey there aren't too many Male Sex fics here.
Thumbs up to you for making me question my heterosexuality!!
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This is the only thing that is crossing my mind right now
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Gahahahaha OMG. I can't stop laughing at that post....
Secondly I'm somewhat pissed that no MALE ON MALE ACTION HAS HAPPENED YET!!!!
Come one! Gimme da sexy time
I've no problem with M/M clop if it's written well, but this could use some work. Get yourself a proofreader, maybe?
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Well, we need a bit more of development on the story, M/M really needs it if it's going to survive all the butthurt.
Also: Y U NO update PMC !?
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>_> Funny thing about that...
I was actually planning on putting a new chapter out later tonight, but then I talked with my editor, Darkwing and I decided it'd be best to go back and correct all my mistakes and even re-write a few part on my previous chapters, mostly because compared to Chapter 11, Chapter 1 was atrocious.
So as of now I'm just editing Chapters 2 - 9 and will probably update this Saturday with a new chapter.
Hahaha thanks for actually showing interest. I just want this story to be as well written as possible and as true to the DMC lore as I can keep it.
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I'm giving this a like just because. But above was my face while reading this.
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Name of the comic by any chance please?
*read title*
*look at image*
*see little shadow on the underside of SA's body*
MFW
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I'll do you one better and link the tumblr
http://sweet-apple-secrets.tumblr.com/post/28647109150/ya-know-ah-used-to-only-be-a-top-part-1-of
enjoy your homopony fap session
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surprisingly, that is actually just a shadow, click above link for penis
/edit, checked in super close mode, and maybe your right
also, not really a spoiler since its macs first time in the comic.
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HA Preciate it
Please sir, moar? This will be interesting..you don't hear much of Big Mac and SHinig ASrmour
Oh god, this is gonna be good.
As a fellow author of Coltcuddling fics, I'm interested in reading what you've crafted.
And a bit surprised at how shocked some of the readers are that this genre exists. It's niche, sure, but some of my favorite fics are M/M.
But I hate how many people down vote it just because it's M/M without even reading it.
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I don't read fics like this, and i won't downvote because it's not in my taste. But how in the hell does this happen?
Why do people even try to ship shining armor with other ponies? Not only is he married to the essential goddess of love, who at any moment in time could destroy any chance of him even loving a dude, or any other pony for that matter, the love the two of them had for eachother beat an entire army.
How is it people can openly ship Armor with others and completely forget this? They nerf his love for his wife, nerf her powers over love (which she's shown to use just because she can) and be like "This totally makes sense!"?
That's all, can someone explain this to me? Please? I R CONFUZED!
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1307551 <This
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(There is nothing to explain, it's stupid and it shouldn't be done.)
I really liked this story and I can say I like where this is going. A few points though:
If you need editing help, feel free to PM me.
The constant switching between present and past tense are jarring and can get in the way of what your trying to say. Also, the lack of punctuation is very noticeable and pulled me out of the story every time.
All in all it's nothing a little editing won't fix and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter
Why my fic isn't this f****g Good?
Thumbs up!
Hmmm, do I like so far? Eeyup