A Tight Squeeze

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Inspired by the fanart Nights Of Hitch
By artist InuHoshi-to-DarkPen

Being a daddy to more than one critter can have its problems, as Hitch finds out in the middle of the night.

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Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #1 · Jun 14th, 2022 · 3 · ·

“Cold night,” Hitch said to the two flying snails who spoke in chirps. Hitch was still amazed that he could speak to critters now that earth ponies have magic too. The pegasnails talked in their chirps again. Hitch nodded and looked towards the bed.

I know it that hitch have that ability to talk to animal just like Fluttershy and he is pretty cool dude

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #2 · Jun 14th, 2022 · 2 · ·

Awww so cute and seeing hitch taken care of the baby Dragon named spike and with his new ability alot of animal really care about hitch and he care about them again he really have Fluttershy ability this was a cute story keep up the good work

Anon E Moose

Anon E Moose #3 · Jun 14th, 2022 · 2 · ·

And then Zipp came along wanting to be read another story.

Darth_krayt

Darth_krayt #4 · Jun 14th, 2022 · 1 · ·

You got to give us more it's so adorable

Quoterific

Quoterific #5 · Jun 14th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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Aww thank you for the comment

Omegathyst

Omegathyst #6 · Jun 14th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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Xanderfox

Xanderfox #7 · Jun 14th, 2022 · 1 · ·

Ok cute but you need to check, you refer to Sparky as both he and she.

Quoterific

Quoterific #8 · Jun 14th, 2022 · · ·

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Thanks and corrected. I wrote this before Make Your Make and I don't have Netflix, so I had to change during the second edit

Xanderfox

Xanderfox #9 · Jun 14th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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Sparky is a boy btw.

AllenVth

AllenVth #10 · Jun 14th, 2022 · 2 · ·

That was adorable.

Micaela

Micaela #11 · Jun 15th, 2022 · 1 · ·

Awww cute 😊😊😊

SIGAWESOME

SIGAWESOME #12 · Jun 16th, 2022 · 1 · ·

this was also inspired by the nursery rhyme "There were 10 in the bed, and the little one said", if you can remember that one way back in your childhood.

Yes! I was about to comment on that when I read Hitch falling out of bed.

At any rate, this was adorably cute.

Yordna

Yordna #13 · Jun 16th, 2022 · 4 · ·

Single Dragon Dad Hitch is so cute, I really hope the show explores it a bit. It'd be a great message to actual kids with single parents as well

fanreader999999

fanreader999999 #14 · Jun 16th, 2022 · · ·

Mm.

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #15 · Sep 19th, 2022 · 1 · ·

“Now open wide,” Hitch cooed as he directed the spoon towards the baby dragon’s mouth. Sparky did as his new dad instructed him to do and both of them grinned as Sparky swallowed. It was then that the sheriff noticed the dragon squirm in his raised chair. Lifting Sparky up, he held him in a position so that his head rested on his shoulder. With a gentle pat, Sparky released a satisfying burp and Hitch breathed a sigh of relief. He was lucky that little Sparky couldn’t breathe fire. Yet.

I hope Hitch will be prepared for when that happens.

“Be my guest. You’re not the first,” Was all that he said. The three of them nodded their heads in thanks as the two seagulls flew over to the bed, choosing to roost at the best posts on either side. McSnipps Alot scurried across the floor and made tucked himself in. Hitch managed to chuckle to himself as he closed the window one final time. he counted how many critters were there, plus himself and it came back with a grand total of seven critters, one baby dragon and a stallion sleeping together for the night.

He*

It was during the middle of the night that Sparky shifted position, causing McSnipps Alot to change position and causing the bunnycorn and then the pegasnails to be shoved along. A domino effect soon occurred down the line of sleeping creatures until it reached Hitch. The poor stallion was pushed hard enough to drop onto the floor with a loud thump.

Oofity.