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With end-of-year exams at the School of Friendship taking much of her time and energy, Ocellus the changeling has been feeling tired and stressed. Her friends offer to take her to Canterlot for a break, but Sandbar has an even better idea - a romantic dinner at the Tasty Treat.


Once again, this story was requested by chazkopa, whom I would like to thank for giving me an excuse to write an Ocelbar-centred fanfic. I was thinking of doing one anyway, and I may do one set in the Locoverse at a later date, but for now, this has allowed me to indulge in one of my two Young Six OTPs (sorry, Yonabar fans).

The basis for this story, again, is a picture by 13mcjunkinm which I've adopted as the cover art. Another artwork that came to light while I was working on the story, and which I've worked into the narrative, is this.

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“Well...yes and no. I was kinda hoping...” Sandbar paused and shyly rubbed his arm. “...well, I kinda wanted it to just be me and Ocellus.”

Ohh like a date awww 🥰

Comment posted by ChazMLPFIMX deleted Jun 19th, 2022

Well this is a pretty interesting start of a story here and yeah I really do want to ship those two so much they are so cute together but anyway it looks like the exam have finished and it looks like everybody are just basically hanging out especially the young 6 but they notice Ocellus was pretty exhausted from the exam and she basically over worked herself again so they think they should just go to Canterlot for vacation and Sandbar ask Ocellus to go out with her to dinner and she was very shocked but she did say yes but before then the kids finally arrived to the destination but they all split once they got to the city and it looks like sandbar took Ocellus to the boutique where Rarity set up her other shop there and Sassy saddle is there and she was pretty excited to help out those two specially with other creatures but with that they finally got their tux and dress and they look like they're ready to head back to the hotel to get ready I wonder how the date will go

Seems alright fiction. (reads it) pretty good.

“...we're dating!” squealed Silverstream ecstatically.

Sandbar gazed at Gallus, feigning disbelief. “Is this true?”

Omg that's also my shipping as well 😍🥰

Oh my goodness this was a pretty nice story so it looks like the night has come and they are ready to go to dinner and yeah it is the tasty treats when they being served by saffron which awesome to see her again and basically there are having a little a moment together until Ocellus ask a question that if he feels something for her which it turns out that yeah he really was in love with Ocellus which she was surprised and happy to hear he said that to her then after dinner they went walking to the park and basically just watching the night sky and then they have their lovely moments with each other and shared a kiss with each other but they had to get back to the hotel where the friends are waiting and it looks like gallus and silverstream have there a little announcement as well they also found love with each other and became a couple which yay and I really like to see a stories like that but anyway this was really good keep up the good work

“I know, right?” agreed Sandbar. “It's as if her idea of a good restaurant is one with no real décor and nothing you can call palatable! That's how conservative and...boring she is.” He gave a wry smile and shook his head; “I tell you what, she kinda shot herself in the hoof with this one. Hardly anypony took her seriously for a long time after that.”

Well she was crazy anyway and nobody take her that thing seriously after that

This was a grand story. I really enjoyed it!

I think this is cute so far. I wish I saw Sandbar x Ocellus stories more often.

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