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I write horse words to get all these ideas out of my head. There are too many living rent free! I write for myself, publish for everyone, and to show that I exist/existed.

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[A Choose Your Own Adventure]
Featured 3/18, 3/19/23

Time is running out for this planet and every living thing on it. The eons quickly turned into millenniums, then centuries, to decades, years, months, weeks, then days, and final hours. Equus does not have long until it is decimated.

How will Twilight react to this catastrophe? A world doomed to a fiery demise. Fate has set a path to end all life on this planet, but maybe . . . just maybe . . . it doesn't have to be the end at all. Although, that is for you to decide.

[Click "Wake Up Call" to Begin]

[Appears lengthy because this is a short-wide CYOA where some choices are still available later on. The average length per path is approximately 1,700 words.]

[Chapters may look the same if you wish to find all the endings, but depending on the order, even the slightest difference can change everything.]

Check out the Official CYOA group here!

Endings: 10
Unique Endings: 32
Once you get to an ending, feel free to find them all along with the unique endings. Enjoy!

Chapters (169)
Comments ( 47 )
Perfectly Insane
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CYOA tag when?

Hope you all have fun reading this! If you find a path that doesn't make sense, like the path is linked incorrectly, let me know so I can fix it! FimFic's link system is a tough one to grasp. Thanks!

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This is the beginning of the great CYOA tag quest. Glory to CYOAs!

This is gonna go so hard!!

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Let's get this party started! Uns uns uns uns uns

Neat, I was looking for more CYOA's to read.

Congratulations on finally completing this! This will be a really fun adventure hehe

I already died :fluttercry:

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You were so close!

I have died once more

Welp, my first go-around didn't turn out so hot (or in this case, would it be more apt to say that it did?). Lemme go back a step and see if I can cook up something better.

Turns out I'll have to go back further than "a step". Eh, 'twas worth a shot!

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Ha! Ha ha! That was punny

Alright, having just explored every choice branching from "Visiting Celestia After 3", I can safely say that it's not the way to safely solve this. Time for another change of plans.

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If it's any consolation, I wound up here too.

Alright, first successful effort!

Ah, so Starlight and Twilight is the way to go straight off the bat. I died with the sisters first, then with Canterlot, but eventually got around to it.

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There is a way to win with both Starlight and the Sisters. :moustache:

Maybe I'm just dumb, but I've gone through this several times now, and I still can't find any proof that Ending categories 7 and 8 exist. What pathway(s) am I missing?

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7 and 8 are the rarer of the bunch. 7 has two paths and 8 has one. They’re out there! Have you found 9 and 10 yet?

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Yeah; the only reason I brought it up was because they're the only two I haven't found.

Ah, I always enjoy it when someone makes a proper CYOA. And it's no easy feat.
Looking forward to reading this!

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Yeah, it was quite the project, but I had a blast writing it. I have a lot more CYOA’s planned if you want to stick around to read em.

Feel free to comment how you do!

Awesome! I've wanted a CYOA like this for a while! Thank you!

"Freak out at Celestia" seems to lead to the wrong page here. It jumps directly to informing Canterlot.

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Thanks for your appreciation and link error find! It means a lot

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I got here from 24, cast the spell. I'm not sure if this is where I should be because there's nothing about a spell being cast and Twilight is in Canterlot with the sisters

Aha! So I was supposed to get here from 145!

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Thank you both very much for pointing them out! They have been fixed and should be among the last of the errors - fingers crossed. These errors must have happened when I linked them all already, added a new chapter, moved it, thus messing some things up. Again, big thanks!

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Fixed! Thanks once again for helping make this a smoother experience for others. Hopefully this was the last missed up link.

Ah ha! The real secret ending!

sorry one more possible correction: since Ending 5 of 10 is "Died with Ponyville" this might be ending #4

It says "died alone" but you can get here through a Starlight path from 44

It says "died alone" but you can get here through a Starlight path from 44

Wait, why are "saved the world with the sisters" and "saved the world with Starlight" both given unique ending 30?

Wait, why is this ALSO 30? I thought 30 was winning with Starlight, and I also got 30 for winning with the sisters.

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All fixed! Thanks for finding them; not sure why 44 was so borked.

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Because both Unique Endings say the same thing even if under different main endings.

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RB_ #44 · Mar 26th, 2023 · · · 167 ·

It took me an embarrassing amount of deaths, but I got here eventually!

This was a lot of fun! I may try for more endings later.

This is a CYOA done right!!, you just earned yourself a new follower.

I keep seeming to get the same/ similar endings, i'e keep dying, am a bit frustrated, but that's just a show of how good this is

though I kind of feel a marker at the top showing which page you came from for this might be helpful, I don't know

finally

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