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Mockingbirb


A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)

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Spike the dog is dying. Sunset takes a desperate gamble to save him.


Flaws in the story are the fault of the author, not the fault of the prereaders: Cloud Ring, Anna-Flora, ninjadeadbeard
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This story might be an entry in the "A Thousand Words Contest," but who really knows at this point? An author's entries are limited to a total of five, one story for each of the contest categories, and I've now written more than five eligible stories during the contest period.

(#1000words 1000words 1000 words) (#portal-transformations portal-transformations)

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Comments ( 14 )

11254746
This is EXACTLY the story I was thinking of! Thank you so much!

11254753
No problem! I try to read as many stories as I can with Puppy Spike since sadly there aren't that many

I started crying because my dog passed last week :(

Sadly, you can't save them all. πŸ˜”πŸ˜’

Wow. Just wow.:fluttershysad:

I won't lie the pacing feels a bit slow and plodding, but everything else is great!

You really captured that in and out feeling that older people go through, and I loved that.

The dialogue felt a bit like exposition at times, but once you reach this point you almost kind of have to do it that way with older folks that have lost it.

I fully appreciate the ending showing Sunset doesn't even care about her wings.

It was a great way to highlight what Spike meant to her without having to say it.:pinkiesad2:

Its been 26 years.:fluttercry:

Just so you know you linked Dog Years to my userpage.

11254955
Now fixed, thank you! :twilightsheepish:

Forget killing Sunset. Sci Twi is going to murder the universe for this. And no amount of Friendship Magic is going to stop Midnight this time.

11254782
I know how you feel. I just lost one this past Wednesday May 25th

congrats
you've written the first story i've ever faved and downvoted
you get the fav for writing a good story
but you get the downvote cuz fuck you for making me feel

Wished it did worked though..

Made no sense that he stayed as a dog when crossing over

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