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Equestria at War790 stories ·1,794 members

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In Griffonia, Rosa Maledicta has begun her crusade. In the Crystal Empire, King Sombra has returned. Ponies that survived and fled to Equestria has witnessed the death and destruction that magic caused, and for months rumors spread and idea had formed; to ban all magic and replace the Princesses.

My entry for the Fifth Annual Equestria at War contest. Here.

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Ciphers #1 · May 27th, 2022 · · ·

"So you would give up your own magic, then, Blueblood?" Luna has come down from her throne and moved closer to Blueblood.

"I would. That means I won't have a chance to turn into another Nightmare Moon," Blueblood said smugly.

Never seen BB be the ones to give up magic so easily
and in Two first paragraph, you change the character but still use "I", which make me though that character just teleported from Crystal Empire to Griffonian Republic