What are Mosaics? They're a collection of broken pieces that tell a story. What happens when you lose a mosaic? You piece together the missing pieces one by one.
Join me in this journal as I attempt to piece the missing pieces.
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DeathFox4
I am the author. I write words. You are the reader. You bring the words to life, along with my messages. All I ask of you is that you bring my words to life...and learn from my life.
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Is this an anthology?
Well, this is definitely quite a unique story, and I don't mean that in a bad way. You have an interesting premise, both in narrative terms and in terms of your format. What you have already is pretty good, but I'd caution you to be careful going forward. The [DATA REDACTED] writing style can make a story very good or very bad depending on how it's used. I've seen too many bad SCP authors who think that deleting random words automatically makes a story more gripping. Just remember to use it in moderation, and only when it actually adds to the experience, and you should be fine.