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This story is a sequel to My Little Pony: Sparkling Harmony: Future Incursion


A revelation from the future has thrown Sparkler for a loop. Fleur De Lis, An Alicorn like her that had hidden her wings until Sparky's and Misty's trial, is allegedly her biological sister. This has raised questions in her mind.

WHY did Fleur never say anything?

Was Fleur adopted?

Was Sparkler herself Adopted?

What do her parents know?

One way or another, She's going to get answers.

At least this time she doesn't have to feel bad about springing surprises when a letter would've been too slow.

If this story gets 25 likes I'll add to Sparkling Storytime.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 39 )

great chapter wonder what is going to happen next time on sparkler ball z

“Alicorn, Earth pony, Pegasus, Unicorn, and now bat pony, are they missing any pony species?” Nightlight asked.

it would be funny if they had a changling kid

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I mean…not sure how that sure how that would be possible.

Loved it! And Nancy, eh?

Alicorn, Earth pony, Pegasus, Unicorn, and now bat pony, are they missing any pony species?” Nightlight asked.

zebra and donkey?

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i am just saying it would be funny if they had a changling child next it may not be possible but it would be funny

OMG I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS LATEST CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Now this sets things up for Fleur and Fancypants to be regular Characters in the series. :)

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But still equine races.

And Nancy, interesting choice you made

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awesome i can't wait to see what happens next captain_cosmos your my new idol right now. AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love it with a big dose of awesomeness XD

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Thank you for your kind words.

How about a crystal pony? Donkeys and Zebras aren't ''ponies" but they are all equines. Know one common characteristic of 'wild' equines compared domesticated ones

Isn’t a Kirin a sub pony species of a unicorn? While the crystal pony is the subspecies of earth pony? Technically their little family is two subspecies short… right?

Btw wonderful start to this sisterhood adventure. Faust knows Fleur and Sparkler need a good sisterly adventure that doesn’t involve one of them being kidnapped. I swear Discord loves giving Sparkler chaos after chaos in the form of crazy ponies.

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your welcome captain_cosmos

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Ha! You think Discord's the cause of all these crazies? Lol.

As for a sisterly adventure, That could be in the cards for Season 3

Also, I guess a Kirin would be a suspecies. Yeah.

great chapter wonder what is going to happen next time on sparkler ball z

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so its out, what you told me long ago

Damn, you are QUICK at writing! I'm impressed! Good job as always!

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I can write a thousand words in a day. It's rather easy if you already know exactly how you want the story to go

Well the truth is out, where will things go from here? We shall find out next time, wonderful chapter XD

its fine, quality is importnant. I mean, loo at my uiploads

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It’s less about quality and more about me not having a cover for SH Season 3 yet. Ehehe

Damn, you leave me wanting more EVERY SINGLE DAMN TIME! The waits are worth it though! :twilightblush:

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Don’t worry. Already writing the first Chapter of Season 3 so as soon as that’s done and a Cover to go with it It’ll be up. :)

In the meantime, have fun theorizing what bay Sparkler actually is based on everything you have from Clear Cut so far. Ehehe. Because whatever Sparkler is, she’s clearly not a normal pony

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good and Sparkler... now i get the feeling like she's Equestria's only hope against her will.

Ir destinated to be ruler aginst her will

Sparkler: But i don't wanna run a government!
Fleur: This has been your destiny all along, no buts!

Great chapter wonder what is going to happen next time on sparkler ball z

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We could very well be heading towards Sparkler finding the truth of her origins soon

hmm Aqua could very well be their mother or even another sister (if it is in relation to her) if Aqua is not then could be part of a team keeping an eye on Sparkler and Co,

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There’s already kinda a team keeping an eye on things.

Clear-Cut, and Fletcher and his crew.

this is getting really intense i love love love it AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So much going on and so many questions, it's hard to keep up lol, mysterious chapter, love it XD

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This chapter was essentially a big clue to Sparkler’s true origins.

“Alicorn, Earth pony, Pegasus, Unicorn, and now bat pony, are they missing any pony species?” Nightlight asked.

Kirins are still ponies?
If so, and if they end up adopting one, it's a good thing they moved out of wooden-made houses

“I’m only gonna say yes to that because you have magic and can defend yourself.” Flash responded. “But you holler if you need me. You hear?” He asked.

"I hope you'll be more useful than your descendants one day"
"What was that?"
"Nothing"

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Huh? Magnus took down Sprout's main weapon with his Captain America Shield. He wasn't useless.

Aurora and Thundercracker chuckled a little. Sparkler nodded. “Alright fine, I forgive you. If only because I’m about to get some petty revenge. You have two more grandkids and Twilight and I are engaged.” She said, smiling at them.

How is this revenge?

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