I'm just someone who isn't much of a talker, but does like to share several ideas I've thought of.
This story is a sequel to Zecora's Homecoming
Spike, Pinkie, and Rarity go to the kingdom of diamond dogs, which unlike the ones they met a few years ago are actually pretty friendly. The problem seems to come from the royal family's daughters, Fiona and Amber. Fiona seemed to be a bit spoiled and doesn't think about others that she deems below her. Amber on the other hand is a tomboy who feels confided. Rarity and Pinkie both help each sister in their own ways.
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“Maybe we could… get more minotaurs and buffalos. Or maybe even a donkey.”
“A donkey?”
Yeah they almost there's donkey live in Ponyville and yeah it's always interesting to see more creatures
I guess they still have PTSD from that huh I mean I don't blame them that would be very scary
Seems like a great starting chapter! I love how you didn't make them all sisters. I feel bad for Amber though, I'd imagine she's like a Rainbow Dash who had more strict parents
Oh wow just like a touch screen nice
And speaking of PTSD Rarity still have bad memories of them
To be honest I kinda hoping the tennis ball hit in the horn on Rarity like what happened to izzy lol
More Diamond Dogs are a welcome sight to see on this site, more the merrier in fact!
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Not a fan of them being all related?
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Um, no. I don't mind them all being sisters, I actually found the original plotline of the comic very intriguing. I just think that it makes more sense for them to all be different breeds of dogs if they're not related
Oh ok once again this is a different direction for the characters then once again I'm going to have to treat this as an alternate universe
You and skystar would have in common with each other
Wow ok this is a different situation so Rarity is preparing a dress and still can't figure out what to do until Pinkie Pie came along to ask her if she can make clothes for the cake twins but then there cutie marks is glowing and leading them to the Treehouse instead of the castle and they got spike to join with them and to everybody's surprise that looks like they're heading for a village and a kingdom of the Diamond Dogs but apparently the much different from the diamond dogs that Rarity and others meet and she still have some bad memories from them but nevertheless it's a friendship Mission and are on there way and it took them a few hours but they finally made it and not a good way to start off their first visit and a female Diamond dog named Amber was trying to escape from her guards and unfortunately they got themselves in trouble so they had to meet with the queen name Katherina and I can say she is a very over protective of her daughter's which apparently Amber has a twin sister named Fiora but Verity and the others explain what is going on in Equestria and maybe show them around town and they show them the boutique and it looks like Katherina have friends working there name Jenny and indi then things were actually starting to be okay until Amber dissappear and this frustrated Katherina so that's not good and it looks like they found the problem I wonder how they can work this out guess we'll find out next time
Once again it's really nice to see the Diamond dog getting more attention especially those characters specifically even though this is a huge difference foam instead of being sister's Katherina is the mother of Amber and Fiora and she is friends with Jenny and indi which again I did not have any problem of them being sisters but that's just my saying here and it's too bad Mage Meadowbrook big mac and muad pie didn't come but I guess it makes since to have Pinkie Pie to come because she probably have more in common with Amber and Spike I'm not sure but I guess because he's the royal advisor he should be there but overall not to bad of the change here
Yeah that's the one I was talking about those two would have get along just well how much they have in common with each other
Yeah I really want to see them again but too bad they only show them only one time and they just basically disappeared and with the new addition of a different kind of Diamond Dogs this would have be awesome to show them again
Oh yeah that's right I forgot about that when those golden gang was talking about the crystals becoming a weapon and they created a magical surge or something that becomes dangerous if you put them together
Ohh this situation becoming very serious so Pinkie Pie and Amber snuck away to have a little fun knowing to the fact that she's going to probably be in trouble soon by her mother but she really wanted to show her around and despite her reputation she really wanted to be treated equally like the other Diamond dog not just being royalty and just like Pinkie Pie explained it does remind me of Princess skystar when she has an overprotective mother so Pinkie Pie as usual find another way to make everything a little fun which Amber is pretty excited to see but it looks like they met up with a diamond dog named Moonbeam and apparently she looks like she sees Better Days because she's been coughing really badly but she says she's okay and went back to deliver the diamonds meanwhile Rarity is talkin with Indy and Jenny about their design and everything and she even explained about her experience with the other Diamond Dogs she meets back in season 1 until Moonbeam showed up with the diamonds that she's delivering but apparently she still having coughing problem and the others are getting worried about her but she wants to reassure them it's just a coughing fit so she was going to get the other load of the diamond they found in the mind and it looks like Rarity and the other Diamond dogs are going to prepare a dress for Fiona meanwhile Spike and Katherina was still searching for Amber which the queen is getting very impatient and annoyed and I really don't blame Spike she can be very annoying and while he was still looking he found an unconscious Diamond dog and it turns out it was Moonbeam and she was unconscious barely breathing so Spike and the queen had to take her to the hospital but things got really bad when the earthquake shake the ground and Amber was starting to get worried about her younger sister so she went back to the boutique so far they are okay they're just making a dress which Fiona was pretty excited but until they heard the news that Moonbeam is in the hospital and they all ran to see if she's okay luckily she is but she was still needs to recover and whatever is affecting her has to do something about the Mine so they had to close it for safety reason and it looks like Amber is in trouble but Fiona was showing the diamonds and Pinkie Pie wanted to look at it until the two diamonds were connected and sparked a reaction sending both of them a shock luckily it was just a small but it could have been bigger and it turns out it could be the crystals that the Griffins were using as a weapon and Katherina and her friends knows what's going on but they can't say it so Pinkie Pie Rarity and Spike has to figure out what is going on and why is the diamond dogs are hiding this kind of secret about those diamonds well I guess we'll find out next time
Poor Moonbeam! I hope she'll be okay!
Oh no!!
Oh boy having flashback during the pandemic
I can see that she has a hoarding problem
You think we just basically escalated the problem already
Oh boy things are going crazy right now okay so Rarity Pinkie Pie try to figure out what to do next so they ask Fiona what's going on but she's just as clueless as well but they notice something about her clothes that she's never really wear and never gotten rid of apparently she has a hoarding problem but I think there's more to it and then they found Spike a little frazzled about katharina and she's being unreasonable lately so they talk to Fiona again and she can't really get rid of anything so she offered them for dinner and it looks like they got Amber to come out after being in trouble and they try to talk with katharina about opening up about the crystals but she's really not say nothing and that really upsets Amber so it looks like she's took her own manner and she made her Sweet Escape the ponies and Spike went back to the boutique to try to ask Indy and Jenna but once again they still got nothing from them because but they noticed something if the changes going around especially the earthquake it's getting more dangerous meanwhile Amber went to the hospital to ask Moonbeam about the diamond and the crystals but of course her mother is on her tail I mean she only got some of the information but nothing too much and she just kept chasing her and she went to the boutique to ask those two again they tried to deny it but Amber is starting to lose her patient about this whole Secret even Fiona is starting to getting frustrated as well if she wants to know about the secret as well Jenna and indy was going to say something but Katherine told him not to say anything seriously something really bad happened that she refused to remember before things got really ugly the earthquake started to shake again but it became very strong and created a sinkhole Pinkie Pie Fiona and Amber fell Rarity Spike and the other Diamond dogs have to get to them and what is katharina hiding I guess we'll find out next time
Good job Pinkie Pie now this is a emergency
I liked the ending! It's a really great wrap to a nice rewrite of the comics! I agree that having all six of the main dogs we were introduced to were all sisters, it seemed odd to me considering they were all different breeds. I was fine with the artists wanting to explore the diverse breeds of dogs as they do with the cats in the Abyssinian's comic, but it was a bit of a stretch that I could put aside for the comic, but it was a lingering complaint (at least the cats weren't all siblings). Great job!!
Oh boy that's not good the toxic air is starting to get to them
Hey it's actually nice to see that ability from Rarity ever since season 1
“A turtle?” Fiona questioned.
“Tortoise,” Indiana corrected. “I’ve never seen one like this before.”
Just like in season 2 when Fluttershy corrected Rainbow Dash about tank
Actually that would have been a good idea to have her with us especially dealing with animals like that
Wow that was a pretty good one here especially to see the Diamond Dogs again but except for the new ones anyway Pinkie amber Fiona and Indy are basically trap Underground and they need to find a way out of here and it looks like amber is blaming herself for all this mess but they wanted to tell her that she shouldn't blame herself they never knew the trouble this will cause but for now they had to find the exit meanwhile Katherina Rarity spike and Jen are preparing to get going the problem is they don't know around the Mine but Moonbeam wanting to come with them despite her condition but she does know the mines better so they want down to get them meanwhile Pinkie Pie and the others who where with them trying to find their way until they found some of more crystals and most importantly what's also causing the problem apparently those weird looking tortoise with the one who creating the toxic fume and they really need to get out of here before they get infected but sooner or later both side and finally found each other and Amber and the others explain about the situation and what the cost of the toxic air once they made it to the hospital Katherina explain to her daughter's about this whole thing what happened to the father and the disaster of the Kingdom the two daughters are pretty shock about this new discovery then the others of Katherina told them as well and it looks like the amber and Fiona forgive there mother and she even want to teach them how to play sports while this is happening Rarity Pinkie and Spike cutie marks and scales shine means that there mission is success and heading back to Ponyville this was pretty awesome and I hope to see the Diamond Dogs again in the future keep up the good work