Like what I do? Leave a comment! All writers love comments!
Page generated in 0.047 seconds
Total duration
916 users online
1,001,093 hits today, 1,799,155 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Well, what can I say?
dl.dropbox.com/u/15594070/Pics/Random%20Shit/shut_up_and_take_my_money_by_mcsadat-d56cn0o.jpeg
Dis gon be gud....
This is gonna be a bumpy ride
lol, this should be entertaining. Though I did notice some typos in it still. Now comes the part where I demand moar of this glorious originalness
1284728 //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
Eh. Dialogue is a little trite.
Seems like a nice introduction. Good that you got away from fandom impression of Lyra and made your own personality of her. Admittingly
the dialogue is a little bit stale, but different. It shall be interesting as the story progresses.
I don't like human stories..but I'll give this one a try, you've impressed me before Anony, I have a feeling you're going to do it again.
1284728
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_ooh.png
i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/034/706/winternet.jpg?1318992465
is this going to be a long story?
i like the story so don't stop......if it ok whit you....
this will be awesome!
You're in the sidebar, and I expect you to move into the featured box soon. Excellent start!
I want some MOAR!
chzbronies.files.wordpress.com/2011/11/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-brony-gaze-upon-it-and-daww-at-its-cuteness.jpg
here, you earned this
oh also
img.humorsharing.com/media/images/1207/i_hilarious_moar_pictures_005_5015918e6aeda.jpg
Dear Celestia.... This is awesome
i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/113/213/shutup_fluttershy.jpg
1284728
I just noticed something about that pic. Is Lyra's hoof holding up Bon Bon by her naughty bits? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_ooh.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_gaze.png
Country.
Or on another continent if you prefer.
Tsundere Lyra is best Lyra. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_gaze.png
and america is a planet the writing seems a little stiff something you'd expect from an intellectual like twilight not from a musician like lyra
I like it! Interested in reading more!
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!
I'm gonna need some more of this, Author-Man. Chop chop.
Yep need more.
1284728
What's the fic about ?
I really should have said aspirin instead of Ibuprofen.
Lyra, why u so adorable
I like your descriptions of the human world through Lyra
Please don't make him a utterly weak against ponies. And why the heck is he getting headaches? Either way I want some MOAR!
Are those headaches some kind of magic allergy?
1291539
Oh dear.
Having an allergy to magic would suck so bad if we could visit Equestria.
A medicine would be made to counter it probably.
1291649
A medicine to counter a form of energy? Good luck with that!
I thought of something like this in my upcoming story as well. Maybe humans react completely different to the equestrian enviroment. Ponies react normal and use magic, earn cutie marks. There are fics out there where even humans earn cutie marks, but maybe even these simple things for ponies might cause violent transformations for humans. Not like *POOF* and the cutie mark is there... What if it will be a painful, gory moment that is traumatizing for the human?
1291718
You've got an excellent point there.
You think it probably would only be fair that the Ponies had some kinda issue with our world too?
1291732
Thing is we don't have magic in our world. maybe chronic and sustained exploring in our world might do the same to ponies since we have electric smog, radio signals left and right and bombard the planet with sattelite signals. Come to think of it, this miight affect unicorns the most since their magic might diminish among all this technological filth in the air. Or it might cause their magic to go random. You want to get a spell out to hold a cup of tea and instead you fire lasers or the flower pot explodes as the flower gets huge. You know stuff that could happen. Or just imagine Celestia comes to our world and messing with the Solar system or merely the Earth's rotation to set the sun right. Or Luna pulling the moon into place. Oh, the tidal waves...
1291777
Oh dear god that would be terrible...but it makes since!
Dear god this is awsome!
More please?
Lyra's Human Obsession: Origins
this is how it began people
Tv is addicting in all cultures
Favorite, liked, can't wait for more :)
Ok, I'm. Hooked. Bring on the story.
... i see what that human did thar!
giggity lyra is so innocent..... welp im gonna take that humans advice and sleep ... its 1 in the morning here
DAW OVERLOAD
I can't tell if I should feel like he kind of took advantage of her, or if should just say 'D'awwwwwwww'. I'll go with the latter.
The part about there being only a thousand or so ponies seems odd. Considering the number of towns and cities on the official map, including four that appear to have some number of skyscrapers, I'd think hundreds of thousands or even millions would be more accurate.
i.imgur.com/MyBWv.jpg
cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/10171352.jpg
sneaky little unicorn i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/312/563/05d.jpg
So I take it that Bon Bon and Lyra aren't a couple in the world this story takes place in?
"china is another continent"i really wanna punch you for that but besides that this story is quite interesing
1319147 Well, it's certain that it's not in the billions.
1319599 Certainly, billions does seem rather unlikely. I just find the thousands figure to be pretty unlikely as well.
D'aaawwww.
Who's as silly unicorn? You are! Yes you are!
Reaction One: Wow. Lyra's a bitch.
Reaction Two: I'm pretty sure they have refrigerators in equestria.
Reaction Three: I don't know if I like this story...