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S'mores

Chocolate Factory and Blizzard have taken a trip to spread the wonder that is chocolate to random ponies. What could go wrong?

Everything, that's what.

This is a short one-shot I did for VitaExdet's competition. I'm not really sure what's happening with that, but I wanted to give things to the public. It was written in late May.

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AppleBloomster

AppleBloomster #1 · Sep 16th, 2012 · · ·

Well, this was... strange, but that's what the 'Random' tag is for, right?
It could have been a little longer, with a bit more depth and not so rushed, I don't know if it was supposed to be that short because of the competition, but if I can give you a little advice I'd suggest to make one-shots longer so that you can really read into it.
Yet it was an enjoyable read.
I like your style so I might read another story from you.
Keep up the good work!

Quill and Brush

Quill and Brush #2 · Sep 16th, 2012 · · ·

1286207 Yeah, I know it was short, but that was one of the stipulations of the competition. I did have a little more to add on to it, and I might just redo the whole thing and add it as a second chapter, make it longer and more in-depth and such.

But yeah, thanks for the read, and I'm glad you liked it.