A simple earth pony has found an odd creature in the woods. Simple as that... Or not?
All his life Green Mount has fought back the idea of friendship and adventure, wandering alone for years, chasing bits at every corner, and avoiding close pony contact at every moment.
But today, well, today his life is about to change.
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Finally a damn update! :D
Good starting point! I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png .
This has good potential. Tracking to see where it goes.
Hell yeah!
"It would be better if I stop babbling and start talking..." Nah, gotta get that word count up somehow. I honestly found the first part very difficult to read because of how much it rambled.
Now I just have to wait for the second chapter . Really good story beginning though.
A fellow perfectionist eh?
Good show.
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A few spelling and grammar errors, but tolerable. Let's see where this goes.
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Woah, where did you all came from all of a sudden?!
Thank you so much :D
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About that, it's kinda funny, not just the character was rambling, I was actually rambling myself, trying to create something out of a shy pony. I know it's hard to read, but then it made sense to me and it fitted the personality so I kept it . Glad you liked it!
Anyone who says that should be shot
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Lol I don't even know how to answer that, I suppose he's pretty annoying at the beginning, maybe I over did it.
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You sound like you've read the first chapter before... Well, anyway, I hope you enjoy it.
I hope the next update to this story doesn't take so long. Very interesting read, looking forward to more.
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Woo! Another comment!
Glad you liked it, and I hope that, too. I write extremely slow because of many reasons, and I can't promise to be much more faster, but I'll do my best.