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11749674
I'm confused. Don't lie about what?
11749677
Putting effort into a story like this ,I did better than this in fuckin high school.
11749677
Took a entire 15 minutes to read and you say that you put effort into making this.
11749680
Interesting. I wasn't writing chapter stories in highschool. Although this story and it's problems have helped me to see what exactly I was doing wrong on my other stories (like dragging out the narrative and making the characters too depressing and whiney) which helped make my future stories better.
As for effort, I did put effort into this and every story I've written. Which is why many of the chapters have been revised to be from a third person POV rather than a first person POV, because the first person POV is where a lot of the problems came into being.
I'm sorry that you don't believe I did though. Although I do agree that this story was very poorly written in hindsight.
11749680
Ok mister 0 stories if you think you did so much better let’s see em