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This story is a sequel to Your Own Fault for Leaving Fruit Out


After the whole strawberry incident, Anon decided to switch to mangoes for a while.

Will this be any better?

Written for the One Thousand Word contest by Bicyclette

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 19 )

im waiting for the next one where anons house gets broken into by a real threat but his bat pony freinds/ fruit theives protect their freind who feeds them the fruit they desire

I knew there'd be a fic about Echo eventually. She is quite the fruit thief.

I love Echo!

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yep you just have to Love Echo.

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Once you gain her respect.

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Cream cheese bandit strikes, fruit moochers move to counter.

Echo is best batpony!

That was...a surprisingly tame response from Echo. I would have expected the house to have been destroyed and ALLLLLLL the mangoes gone.

But she's such a sweetie how could anyone deny her her favorite fruit?

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Since all of you are busy posting stuff from StormFX I might as well complete the collection:

Echo is such a cute bat pone. :heart:

wow another cute story great job will there be another one

Nice story, simple and funny at the same time. I liked the way Echo was shown here, she's my favorite bat pony :scootangel:

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The Darkness has been appeased. All is well.

But this time he stayed vigilant so as not to be ambushed but any other fruit-obsessed ponies.

I've got a feeling this won't keep him from being spotted, followed home and ambushed later once he lets his guard down.

"You were pretty hungry, huh?"
"I like mangoes," the mare said, eyes returning to normal.
"I can tell."

Duh!

"Well Echo...while I am a bit perturbed as to how you got into my home, if you come back in a few days, I'll have a more delicious way to eat mangoes."

Oh, she will come back.
There is a chance she won't come alone, though...


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

lucky, I haven't even gotten one reading yet! XD

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