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Can the Magic of Friendship heal all wounds in the 14th chapter of Twilight Sparkle and her friends?

With Grogar and the Legion of Doom defeated, Equestria struggles to heal itself from the conflict with its former dictator. But Twilight Sparkle and her fellow princesses will find a way to help lead their homeland and their subjects on the road to recovery!

Continuation of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Season 10, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Season 11, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Season 12, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Season 13

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At last I can rejoice for the legion of doom are imprisoned and doing community service. The new era I hoped would provide a new beginning still lives on. I am sure that no danger shall befall it. And as I sit here, looking into the healing process, I rejoice to know that Cozy Glow is taken into the hospital. Her parents are on their way to reunion and the wounds may heal. I know now that we can’t escape the past. Nor can we rewrite it, hoping to lessen our pain. The best we can hope for is to continue to learn to take from the past only that which is good and move on. Perhaps in the process we will build a brighter future.

Comment posted by Tiber Septim II deleted Apr 17th, 2022

11214079 Due to my autism self-advocacy and public speaking commitments, Part 4 will come out next week.

So, will Part 4 be the end of the trial, or just the end of the case building?

The fact it turns out Cozy Glow was essentially abused by Grogar even worse than we seen is yikes.

Having heard what was said, Jack stared down at the three villains. "Unusual choice of words from the three enemies of Equestria who not too long ago turned ponies against one another and were petrified as a result."

Which was Discord's fault due to his dumb Grogar plan and how he successfully disposed his "pawns" one way or another.

All six princesses could only stare in disbelief at the markings that Cozy Glow had on her back.

Was Spike there too?
It doesn't make sense that he wasn't there since he's supposed to be Twilight's Royal Advisor. He's supposed to be by her side and help her(and the other princesses) make important decisions. So why wasn't he there?
EDIT: Wait, just started reading the next chapter and turns out he IS there, but he should have said something since its his job to advise. Like he should be part of the decision/discussion.

For all the dramatic change that the Legion of Doom has brought to Equestria, It was a relatively large expression of the nations dynamic nature of war. Just one period in the life of one of our world’s several countries, over some of them are at war with each other during any given year. Europe itself has experienced hundreds of wars, some of them much larger than the Legion of Doom event. But because we were eyewitnesses to that war, it’s message was delivered with exceptional impact and we still can read it in the event today. Equestria is a living country, and the nation we live in today is not what it was yesterday, nor what it will be tomorrow.

I don't think it was a good idea to kill off Lavan and Zeb like that.
Like the rogue changelings, those two could have been touched on a bit more.

"But Twilight," Spike protested as he grabbed onto her left wing. "You can't leave now, you're on detox!"

So Spike was there then.
Though he should have been part of the discussion/decision making on the Terrible Trio since its his job to advise as Royal Advisor.
Especially since the fact he's staring at the one who caused him to have PTSD.
He really needs to be part of the Mane 6's decision-making.

"Hey, don't come to me if she ends up back in magic kindergarten!" Spike remarked as the others glared at him. "I don't care what she says, she's not doing this without me! I'll never be able to live with myself if anything bad happened to her because I wasn't there." He followed the trail Twilight and Tempest had left behind from afar.

I like seeing more moments like that with Spike.

Sickened by Sombra's attitude, Spike rose to the air and stared down at the creature that he defeated in the Crystal Empire. "You've got some nerve, Sombra," Spike growled quietly. "Consider yourself charged with two counts of murder, you fiend."

That was a pretty cool moment from Spike.
Saddened that he would not get a proper "rematch" against Sombra to remedy the damage Beginning Of The End did to Spike(since Sombra is going to die again). Sombra doesn't seem to realize it was Spike who foiled him in season 3.
(Same with Chrysalis not realizing its Spike befriending Thorax is what caused her to lose her hive)

Is Flurry Heart going to be there?

Sorry but I think I hit my limit when you broke your original plan in this season project. Ah well, good luck with this. Your fan, Samswordsman123.

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Finally, someone that understands the problem with Discord and how unforgivable his Grogar stunt is!

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I feel like he needs to help make amends more.
Especially with acknowledging what he did to the trio.

Citizens! Members of the Royal Guard of Equestria, the Three Councils and the Imperial Legion! The great day of judgement over Chirin has arrived. Chirin who have transformed into Grogar and those of his allies has acknowledged defeat and surrendered unconditionally.

And so end Grogar and Sombra.
Though its weird that they apparently have ways of containing one's soul in a vial like that suddenly.
Why do I feel like this will backfire?

"In this case, yes," Spike said firmly as he flew over to Twilight's bed. "As your assistant, royal advisor and younger adoptive brother, among other things, I think it's reasonable to break tradition again. We broke tradition once and look what it got you," To prove his point, Spike gestured to Twilight to look at her friends and fellow princesses along with her parents. "Sombra alone is proof that they have no remorse for anything they've done. They won't change their ways like Tirek, Chrysalis and Cozy Glow did."

Glad in seeing more of Spike's position as Royal Advisor(and adopted little brother) is getting used more.

Tirek took a deep sigh as he touched Cozy's right hoof, lightly tapping it. "Princess Twilight, despite our previous hatred for her and her friends…gave us a new chance on life and I want us to make use of it. But…I first want to see Grogar pay dearly for putting Cozy Glow in this situation!"

Is she referring about Spike too on that part when she was talking the Mane 6?
Really, Spike should have been part of the discussion/decision on the trio's fates due to his role as advisor and also how the trio affected him directly just at to the Mane 6(especially since Chrysalis caused him to have PTSD)

"Twilight, if you want any further reasoning for avoiding a trial," Gentle Gust advised, looking at Twilight's most recent paperwork. "We did detect some nerve agents in your bloodstream from your recent panic attacks. If you avoid the trial, then the continued risk of these agents will be lowered dramatically."

So there really is nerve agents in her blood.
Where did they come from.

"You'll never have the chance," Tempest coldly retorted. "You will be under constant watch until your body expires and your spirit passes on. And that won't be for a long, long time."

Looks like they learned and now have actual guards to keep watch on Tartarus then.

Comment posted by Tiber Septim II deleted May 1st, 2022

Liked seeing more of Luna's abilities there.


Disappointed that it looks like that is it for Sombra though.
Was really hoping in the projects that Spike would have a "rematch" against him to remedy the damage on what happened to Spike in Beginning Of The End(a damage that Discord had caused)

Grogar's spirit has been set free. Now the healing process can truly begin.

I can only hope that the damage done by Chirin and Sombra be remembered by the next generation were Sunny Starscout and her friends are.

the ticket part made me think of polar express one of my favorite movies

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It's gonna take a lot more than that for Equestria to recover from the wrath and war Chirin have unleashed as Grogar! Also, he should not have been accepted back by his kind even in the afterlife after what he have done while he was alive! :flutterrage::duck:

Comment posted by Tiber Septim II deleted May 22nd, 2022

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Did something happened?
Since nothing showed up and the author isn't online since last Wednesday

Can we stop blaming Discord over and over again already?! This is the healing that we are focusing on.

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He was online yesterday, so at least nothing too terrible.

Luna was just wholesome.
Nice

“She is a pony of culture,” Trixie agreed. “But there’s something else I noticed. Earlier today, when I went into your office, you had a strange look on her face. Don’t tell me Sombra possessed you again?”

Is she referring to what happened in Beginning Of The End?
Honestly it brings up a wound on what happened to Spike, a damage I really wished got addressed in the projects

That was pretty funny. Also, aren't they called nursery rhymes?

Hopefully, Diamond and Cozy will bond and be able to help each other.

What happened with Spoiled? What was her sentence? Shouldn't she have at least got half of Filthy's money from the divorce?

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No, she possibly have lost everything including her money for the treatment she have given her own daughter. Even if she repents and by some miracle is given a second chance, she would never be viewed the same again and she'd be poor for life and there'd be no chance for her ever being remarried to Filthy.

11249061 What good is money to a mare imprisoned for likely a life sentence?

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This may not be how it works in the show's canon, but in RL, all divorces (at least in America) result in the other party getting half of the combined shares.


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I don't remember her getting a life sentence.

I’m sure the author will give out the summary in every new episodes.

This was really good in showing Cozy and Tiara being on their way to recovery there by meeting each other

"We all did, Cozy Glow," Chrysalis sighed, looking over at Tirek. "I just got caught up in getting revenge on Starlight Glimmer that…"

When will she ever realize that Spike befriending Thorax is why she ultimately ends up losing her hive?
Its disappointing she reformed before she understood that its ultimately Spike on why the changelings reformed.
It really felt like Spike truly had no credit on the changelings reforming..

Chancellor Neighsay will somehow get shocked at this.

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You will have to wait and find out for yourself. :moustache:

I just remembered something, Suri's Fluttershy clones are still out there I think.

It's kinda good to see Neighsay again after 3 seasons. Though Tempest and he are in the same chapter but nothing is involved between them (since I ship them 👁️👄👁️), this is still a great chapter. 😁

I think Suri might have had experiences with the criminal underbelly of Manehattan, kind of like "The Godfather" sort of stuff.

Well, aren't we being referencing devils.
Take some dialogue from Disney's 101 Dalmatians, and spin them into this story.

Isn't arson illegal in Equestria?

Clearly Teddy Buzzcut doesn’t see anything wrong with getting back at Cozy Glow. It’s a sort of low level dislike that bedevils classrooms up and down the country today. No wonder the students are leaving their love and forgiveness in their droves.

Little did either pony know that at that moment, Teddy was fast asleep in his home in Canterlot, not knowing of the unexpected visit he was about to receive. As Teddy slept, he suddenly began to feel a warm breathing sound on top of him. He tried to turn sides in his bed, but he couldn't escape the warm feeling. He then proceeded to open his eyes and found a scary sight before him!

I thought it would be like this

"Teddy is a student who comes from a family that still believes you three should not have gotten a second chance." Fair Chance added.

it is Cleary His parents is the problem, not him

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