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Grand-Galvatron


Hello Fimfiction Writers, I am Grand-Galvatron, Equestria Girls Fimfiction Writer and Supreme Leader of the Predacons. Yes.

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Sunset Shimmer, after being relentlessly bullied by her peers at school because of the Anon-A-Miss incident, comes to her apartment, drunk out of her mind. In her stupor she accidentally drops a lit match and set's her entire room on fire, dying in the process.

However, instead of passing on to the other side, her soul became trapped in the inferial plain known as the ghost zone.

Here, Sunset will meet and befriend some of the ghosts that lurk inside and she will to keep the ecto-energy inside the ghost zone from corrupting her mind.

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Be sure to Leave a like and to leave a comment below to tell me how my story is so far. :twilightsmile:

Look i'm sorry, but this is not a story for me.

2tail #4 · 2 weeks ago · · ·

The whole ghost with new names for no reason is odd.
It would have been better I think if the 2nd ghost thing had called for twilight, and Sunset reacted to a ghost the moved like a windigo was coming at her.

Maybe then have them use nick names based on how they act or died. Maybe Sunset does it 1st for Twilight because of know the other Twilight.

Ohh, Danny Phantom Cross-Over? Adding it to the reading list, I'll be sure to check it out later

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Will flame fright encounter Danny phantom? Is flamefright be a vengeful ghost?

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probably ruin the apple farm ruin dash's sports career all easy and perfectly petty things to do

So any chance that a certain 'Master of Time' might show up to help Sunset and Sci-Twi get a chance at not dying in the first place?

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Maybe, we’ll just have to wait and see.

JCY2k16 #10 · 1 week ago · · 2 ·

"Hah, you think I care about what that Princess thinks," Apple-Jack said. "About her belief that Sunshit could be reformed. Well news-flash, she was more of an idiot than she actually realized. People like her can't be reformed, it's just not possible, my belief is this, once a villain, always a villain. Sunset Shimmer is no more, and there's no point in mourning someone who doesn't deserve mourning, all I can say is...Good-Bye and Good Riddance."

I know you won't do it but if you could, I have one very small request. See that a huge tidal wave of comeuppance strikes Ms. Stubborn Sally here.

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I'm in the same boat on the names. Why would he find calling her "sunset" annoying? Then give her three longer options? It feels weird. I imagine the names to be ones given to them by humans who deal with them/run into them, ect. Instead of just "You're dead! Here's your new name!"

He's a phantom
Young Danny Fenton, he was just 14,
When his parents built, a very strange machine.
It was designed to view, a world unseen.
He's gonna catch em all 'cause he's Danny Phantom!!!

So no ghost portal

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Applejack is getting a huge ammount of Karma coming after her, her pride, and her family's name.

Ice and Fire let's see what happens!!!

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