With the barrier broken and the Monsters free, Asriel Dreemurr is apprehensive about what he knows is coming. He won't be able to maintain his form for much longer, and is afraid of no longer being himself again.
Then, a mysterious figure offers him a deal. A second chance, an oppurtunity to redeem himself... but the figure chooses where he gets that second chance.
Not wishing to become a Flower again, Asriel takes the chance, and is transported to a whole new world of magic, wonder, sights no Monster has seen, and of course, the magic of harmony and friendship.
And into whose hooves does the figure send him the young Prince to? Why, the hooves of someone else who has been given a second chance, and seeks to redeem herself and make up for the mistakes of the past. None other than the Princess of the NIght, Luna herself.
Come along as the young Boss Monster does his utmost to make good use of this second chance, and along the way, find family in a land far from his own.
Awesome cover by Cyaneworks over on Furaffinity~!
Has a companion story right here, Hopes and Dreams at Canterlot High
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Thank you thank you thank you aahhhhhh you're all amazing
Alright I am really enjoying this so far and Asriel and Luna do sound like a great pairing as a family.
I like it.
this is heartrendingly cute
i need moar
Looking good so far. Would like to see this story continue.
Baby!
Sidenote: nickers are a sound horses make. Knickers are underpants.
AYO!
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that's helpful, thank you, will get that fixed~
I love this story so far. I also love the concept. If you are able to continue this story, please do.
You could say this was an Angel's second chance.
As a fellow undertale lover and mlp crossover writer, I will keep an eye on this. Very well done, great to see undertale's fandom isn't completely dead and overwritten by deltarune.
You set the bar pretty high with such an impressive start, keeping the quality this good will be no easy task, but I am confident in your abilities.
Hope there is more to come soon.
More please, great introduction and I'm eager to read more. No rush on the next chapters, take all the time you need, just as long as you get them done in the way you see fit
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*fingerguns*
If you need an OC for this story, let me know via PM.
Thank you for making this story it was so good I need more of this in life
Wonderful opening, the flow feels very natural.
I am waiting eagerly for more.
Cheers!
Now usually I don't like undertale, Buuut I thought I'd give it a chance.......
NOW, BOY HOWDY DO I LOVE THIS!!!!!!
You have my undivided attention. Let's see where this goes!
Ponies 'n Goats.
What more do you need in life?
I'm glad to see some good undertale fanfic. It seems all of it nowadays is... Very awful. A fellow spends more time blacklisting AUs and relationship tags than they do actually reading, it feels, so this is a breath of fresh air!
I still do not like how everybody treats Gaster like some kind of god.
I thought determination was a trait, or perhaps a power. Not something that could make decisions and "urge" one to do something.
This whole dream sequence is confusing.
Was one of them red?
Well congrats Luna, here's your adorable fluffy distraction!
WOW!! I'm having an absolute blast reading this! I hope there's more on the way soon!
Interesting so-far.
Very good story, can't wait till more comes out
Use "brought" instead of "bring."
I'm actually enjoying this story. Asriel deserved more, I believe, in Undertale.
This is so cudorable(cute +adorable)
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Ok pinky :P
so cute great chapter
ah, good ol' tooth-rotting fluff
on the one hand, painfully cute
on the other, when's the other shoe gonna drop
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Probably Blueblood being himself
Wonderful chapter!
If I may offer a small correction, though, what Asriel is describing with interest, that being the study of the stars and other bodies in space, is actually Astronomy. Astrology is the practice of using the positions of the stars and planets to try to predict the future.
Baby boy. Baby.
Reading this is so delightful!
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Beat me to it. I'm six years into my PhD program and that particular confusion STILL grinds my gears more than it should.
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much obliged~! will fix!
If you ever need an OC to borrow, let me know via PM.
Also I wonder what will happen when Asriel meets Blueblood
Comtinue 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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but will asriel have some new skills or power or will he have the same skills as the game ?????
Update ??????
Please update im so curios of continue this story 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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If you're interested, you can pre-read the next chapter and the sort of mini chapter that goes with it.
But he IS so adorable!!!!
Nice
You keep mentioning Determination which if I remember right is the ability to respawn upon death. So is this story about to get a lot gorier or something? The lore is weird because it wasn't clear if it was respawning or turning back time. I'm leaning towards respawn because characters would comment on you coming back.
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DETERMINATION is something that gives one the ability to cheat death yes, and or there's some implications that it can boost ones abilities in general.
The DETERMINATION that Asriel had in him as Flowey is still around, it hasn't left. Its part of what's kept him alive and around after all, so its not like he's lost that DETERMINATION. And its something that most Monsters can't have alot of. Even Boss Monsters. So Asriel is naturally worried about how much of it he's carrying around, for numerous reasons.
Asriel could use his DETERMINATION in the manner of reloading from a SAVE.
But to answer your question, no, this story isn't going to get gorier or anything.
Ahh, nothing like some good, open, honest communication. Gives me the warm fuzzies.