An earth pony mare was told to never walk alone.
Now, she has to run.
It's getting closer.
An audio reading by Pony&Wolf Productions.
Another reading by Lotus Moon.
Recommended by PresentPerfect.
”This is super high quality.”
—Soaring
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Odd_Sarge
Literally, Reckless. Ponies give this sorrel mare purpose. Be kind. Be happy. Be a good pony. 🐎 1948 - 2024
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I admit I was fooled. This was quite cute, and the short length really added to the jarring uncertainty until the very end.
Lucky for her it was not a griffin.
A fate most unfortunate.
This is super high quality. Love how you spaced out lines for impact/emphasis. And that ending.
We're just all going to ignore the moral implications of involuntary kidnappings to secure relationships, then?
i don't get it
Didn't expect that ending at all. Nice!
11205528
Spoiler that, it ruins the ending. The story does give the impression that she wanted that though, considering how she "shouldn't have listened to the mares but to the stallions". One cold look at it like it being her hope to find a mare to love when there was none in her village. Reinforced by being a time before technology where being able to communicate with some other place for that hope would be extremely difficult if not almost impossible, depending on it's level.
11205528
Yes.
Me: *Tries to be a productive citizen and spend less time online*
Great stories like this that keep pulling me back:
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This was really nice. Your prose is beautiful and that ending managed to be both very surprising and completely logical with the signs hidden into the story.
11250518
Very glad to hear it. Thanks for reading.
11357654
His reaction is priceless: I'm never going to get tired of that discomfort at the comfort. Thanks again for sharing these readings!