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Note: This story is sorely outdated. It's in desperate need of a rewrite that I'm too lazy to provide. Read at your own risk.
What do you do when your world collapses? When a pony you thought you knew turns her back on you? How do you cope when the pieces don't fit and your friendship comes crashing down? A certain white unicorn is devastated when she finds her pegasus friend of many years to be a cold and broken shell of who she once was.
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Edit: This story is extremely outdated. It was but my first attempt, and I have improved exponentially since then. It is nothing to judge my writing by.
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Chapter 2: http://fav.me/d5ewmin
Chapter 3: http://fav.me/d5fndh2
Chapter 4: http://fav.me/d5gcjud
Chapter 5: http://fav.me/d5h231u
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Chapter 7: http://fav.me/d5jwm3u
Epilogue: http://fav.me/d5keiwu
Hooray Vinyl! Also others.
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Oh yes, we will be getting plenty of Vinyl and her antics soon.
this was the shipping story you were working on huh? sounds enthralling :3
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Yes, this is the result of all my work, or rather "work" over the past couple of weeks. Criticism is definitely welcome.
welp I read the first chapter. I don't think I'll get to the second today though. it was pretty good.
(though I was expecting a lot more crying fluttershy)
anyway, one thing I noted was how the colt talks to rarity. I'm not exactly sure, but it seems like a blatant call for action. a plot device if you will and it makes the scene look more ridged in my eyes, especially considering how unrealistic it seems. some high class musician/writer telling a stranger he barely knows about how great she is. you just can't do that in real life.
other then that, it was pretty good and I enjoyed it. ^_^
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Mister Staccato there is a loose cannon, and as his interactions with Octavia and mannerisms show, he is anything but high class. Everyone will just have to wait and see where he winds up.
You have my attention.
better then what i right
"like"
Flarity is best shipping!
Can't wait for vinyl and her shenanigans!!
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Shh, who told you?
1293981 my pinkie sense is telling me that something's going to happen.
Pinkie, wha... How... Whe...
Oops, sorry gotta go byeee!
Octavia! I read it in her 'Dubstep Dishwasher' voice.
Very well written! I'm going to read chapter 2 this afternoon but impressed so far!
Please remove the hyphen line breaks, it doesn't look good on a mobile device.
Hmmmm....Haven't quite decided if I love this one or not..
I like it for sure...just not sure if I love it. There doesn't seem to be any major issues to complain about. I t is fun.......... at least I wish to continue to see how this plays out....at least with the new couple interacting with the musical couple.... it is.....compelling. 
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Not sure who deserves credit for this pic...found it on PB
I found this to be wonderful, and I love the integration of Vinyl and Octavia (of the few shippings I do read, they're my favorite) but in all honesty, I think that Rarity may have overreacted to Fluttershy's ONE encounter of closing her out. If it happened maybe twice or more I could see why Rarity would have cause for alarm, but otherwise, I like this story.
This sir, I am finding enjoyable.
Please write further!
Chapter 3 is finally here! Thank you all!
The absolutely amazing song referenced in this story for those of you that haven't heard it yet: Luna- Eurobeat Brony
Truly amazing story, really well written. I'll be sure to share it around. Waiting for the next chapter
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Can you specify? What speechlessness are you referring to?
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Basically the way I intended to be seen was Rarity is more tripped up by the fact that she was wrong in her assumption of Octavia's preferences than the preferences themselves, which she obviously has no problem with.
I'm so like vinyl in resturants, not giving a crap, eating bread over bread, talking with my mouth full.
Wurd!
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'Dat comment.
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I like the way you portrayed Vinyl and Octavia.
I pictured Sergio's singing with the voice of Frank Sinatradl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png
Can't wait for the next chapterdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_rainbowkiss_flip.png
Well this chapter was quite the annoyance for me to write. The pace will pick up a bit next chapter, I (somewhat) promise.
Goddamn.... To... Much.... Cuteness... Can... Keep... Up... With... It... D'awww so cute!!!
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Yes, I hate this chapter, I can assure you that the next one will be interesting. If not feel free to storm a castle and kidnap a princess of sorts
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Glad you liked it! I disagree, of course, but your opinion is definitely reassuring.
I'll just put this here if the story didn't quite fill you with enough cuteness.
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Keep up the good work.
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I hope you sleep happy knowing you almost killed a man with that GIF.
Thanks though!
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Then my work for the night is donecdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-desalute.png
Wurd.....e621.net/data/preview/04/56/0456e34a76f47593b80dce685581e2fe.jpg
So... Rainbow is upset at the lack of Flutterdash (I assume Flutterdash because Raridash doesn't show up much), and had already confessed her feelings to Twilight. Twilight is unsure how to take it; she's unhappy for Rainbow, but happy for Rarity and Fluttershy.
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Have you been looking through my MS Word documents or something?
Sorry, I can't read this...
The way Aloe acts is not only out of character for her, but it's also professional suicide which just breaks me out of the story entirely.
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Completely understandable, I hate that part as well to the point where the first chapter could get a massive rewrite. And thank you for actually telling me what you didn't like, one of my biggest pet peeves is when people don't let me know my mistakes. Keep being awesome!
Good chapter, a little slow compared to the others but enjoyable nonetheless. It was disappointing seeing Rarity lie, it's almost as if she knew Fluttershy wouldn't have the confidence to call her out.
Poor Rainbow Dash.
You may want to fix a spelling error "Flutteshy".
Second to last chapter everybody! It's definitely been a wild ride for me. New awesome cover art by http://insanebowdash.deviantart.com/
Oooh that ending. Not sure how to feel about that...is rarity happy or sad?
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I still can't get over your amazing name.
She's happy because
Can't wait.... Going to read chapter 5 on the train.
Awww, ending so quickly
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(possibly only) One more chapter to go! However, just because it will be the end of this story doesn't mean it will be the end of this pairing (hint, hint).
Love the story.
Thanks again for using my cover edit for the picture.
Makes me feel like I actually contribute.
This chapter is finally done! I do apologize for the week delay, but apparently I have my own obligations outside of pony or something silly like that. Chances are is that after this there will be one new chapter and a possible epilogue. Thanks for reading!
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I KNOW! The nerve of real life, getting int the way of the Magic of Friendship.
This story realy deserves more views.
I hate when good stories don't get enough recognition. :(
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) and am extremely surprised anyone read past the first two chapters. I have to extend all of my gratitude to all of you beautiful readers. That being said, it is not me that gives the story the views you believe it deserves, so if you believe that, I encourage you, please, spread it around. Tell your friends, your parents, your dog, your congressmen, anybody that you see fit. It truly is my pleasure to serve you guys, and expect much more from me in the future. All though this story will be experiencing it's final chapter (hopefully) this weekend, that does not mean my writings of this pairing are over. They are too adorable to put down 
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Why thank you, both of you. This is the ongoing cliche, but it really is the readers that make the story. Each and every one of you are the reason that this story has lasted as long as it has and are the reason that I continue to write words, no matter how bad I believe them to be. As far as recognition goes, I am thoroughly shocked and surprised at how well it has done, especially being my first story; I never thought it would evolve into such a labor, yet a labor that is completely worth it. I personally believe I have received many, many more views than my story has deserved (not that I'm complaining, of course