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Jack Daniels


Some day you will find me, caught beneath a landslide, in a champagne supernova in the sky.

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Twilight has been overwhelmed with certain...feelings as of late. The, twist your stomach into knots and make your words come out jumbled kind of feelings. The worst part: they're all for a certain party loving pink pony!

Well, that's fine, she just needs to take some time to herself to sort out all of her complicated emotions and maybe work up the courage to say something. At her own pace. Except Pinkie is standing on her doorstep. And its pouring rain outside.

Well shoot.


Set some time during season 3 I guess?

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Comments ( 16 )

Sweet sweet Twipie! They must have had crush on each other for a long time.

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Yeah I like to imagine both were just waiting for the other to say something

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Thanks so much :twilightsmile:

This was your first story? Color me impressed then. The characterization was spot on, the dialog felt organic, and Twilight and Pinkie had enough chemistry together to make the story feel believable. Well done, have a Derpy :derpytongue2:

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Wow! Thank you so much for the kind words!
I see your Derpy and raise you one Pinkie :pinkiehappy:

It's always nice to see good TwiPie

Great story!

This was so adorable! Would you ever be up for a request?

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Thanks! I've definitely thought about requests, it's something I might want to do when I get more of a feel for how I like to write and get a couple more stories under my belt.

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Thanks for the review! I really appreciate the feedback!

Haven't been in this fandom for awhile, but I pop back in to this site every now and again to check updates on two things: horror, and Twinkie, and you have most certainly delivered on the latter. Nice work!

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Thank you! Anytime Twinkie pops up it makes me super happy :twilightsmile:

Twipie! Twipie! Twipie! The Best Ship Of Them All! TWIPIE!

The food was delicious, which was to be expected when Pinkie was involved. They talked for a couple of hours, though it was mostly the pink pony that led the conversation. She caught the librarian up on the various goings on in her life, mostly the pranks she had pulled with Rainbow Dash, though she did include a rather interesting story about an army of squirrels that invaded Sweet Apple Acres and took Fluttershy hostage. Twilight remained mostly quietly, content to listen as Pinkie excitedly related all the stories she had saved up since she had seen Twilight last. Though it did make her a little sad as it reminded her how little time she had spent with her friends recently.

I'm thinking she forgot to feed them :rainbowlaugh: Amazing story btw!:pinkiehappy::twilightblush:

Classic premise, done very well.

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