This story is a sequel to Book 1 - Prisoner and Savior
After narrowly surviving an attack at a Mandor Fueling Station, Princess Twilight Sparkle is slowly getting entrusted into an interstellar war that will soon reach out to her beloved homeland, Equestria. As of now, Twilight's main goal was to head back home and rally her fellow ponies and friends to fight back against the encroaching invaders. Can Twilight rely on her new friends to help protect Equestria from the alien invaders or will her people fall under total enslavement for life?
*Spoiler warning: I already followed up with Midnight Light's first story in MLP Fimfiction and she said that she is no longer continuing where she left off in Prisoner and Savior. So, I'm using my own imagination to help finish the rest of the story my own way so that no one will get confused or offended by it.*
*For those who don't know how this story went down to this point, I strongly recommend you all to read the sequel first.*
You go, he/she/they! I’ll be adding this to my tracked! Admittedly, a touch confused by the change to the name Chmone, and personality I think. Though that’s fine!
Also, I agree on the whole power thing you mentioned on the original. Though not all are as powerful as Twilight, being able to rip space and time like Discord and Starlight respectively is.. horrifying to say the least.
It takes about thirty seconds to change that opinion.
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Not too worry. You'll see how it happens. *Snicker! Snicker*
Aww, don’t worry. The empress will be very pleased to see your success in the capture. That is, she will be pissed in your failure resulting in the capture of a Warrior.
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LMAO!!!
What, is Chmone a hippie who wants to enslave Equestrian for the UFF war machine?
Mu hu wa hahahaha.
Is that how you evil laugh?
Why is it people in desperation and no place to make any deal always choose A) try to make a deal, or B) threats. Neither ever work, C) Mercy is usually more likely to work.
And also, though it’ll be rough, the Empress is gonna struggle a lot more in this battle.
Is this story based off of Star Wars? I only ask because Mandor sounds so similar to Mandalorian.
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Not quite.
The promises of the dark. It seems they always have the power to strike where it hurts.
All hail Empress Twilight Sparkle. Friendship ruler of the cosmos and all egghead loving librarian. Bow or else face the sorting books for eons!
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Very funny, pal.
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There was a crazy fanfic story of the idea of Twilight taking the dark side. It was very dark and sad
Xul purchased, not Vanista, and Trine was supposed to be Vanista earlier, when talking about sick, twisted powers.
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Sorry about that. Typo errors sometimes keep biting me in the ass.
Scare the daylights out of them with erratic movements of the sun and moon. Put on a show, if you will.
She should be dead. Lightning kills most of the time.
In order to control, I remember that the warriors have to focus, leaving them vulnerable. I also remember it not being a laser. Interesting change of how it works.
I can also tell Pinkie is your writing weakness. It’s always about being random with her. I get it, though it denies her her actual personality, and makes Discord feel more like a person than her.
Teleport.
Teleport
TELEPORT!
*In scout’s voice* NEED A TELEPORTER HERE!
Just wanna quickly point out, this means that Vanista had enough power to shake an entire flagship, if Vanista was able to beat Twilight in the duel so easily.
It’s a good thing only maybe 5 per ship will escape, as the technology was established to be VERY difficult.
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Eh, it’s fine. I’m one of those commenter editors. I typically only touch on whatever bothers me most, though.
great story and excellent finish, just wandering if there is any chance of a sequel down the line some day ?