Rainbow Dash has been having visions lately. Despite her best efforts, she has failed to find any good reason for this to happen. Why now? Why her? These questions keep swirling around her mind every second of the day. Will her brother Soarin be able to help her? He had always been there for her, so why can't she bring herself to trust him? With her career on the line and possibly the safety of Equestria on her shoulders, will she rise to the challenge and find out what has been causing these visions?
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Not bad. Work on the grammar a little, but it was interesting. I’m excited to see more :)
Hmm. Intriguing start to this AU story. Definitely appreciated this look at the spin on the human counterparts to Rainbow and the other Wonderbolts before the first meeting with Rarity in this universe. The mental flashes are a very good touch.
My guess is that Twilight is probably a librarian/honors graduate from a School for the Gifted (with her younger brother Spike assisting her and her older brother Shining Armor being a high-ranked police officer), Applejack is, of course, a farmer, Pinkie works at a bakery and also as a party planner and Fluttershy working as an animal care specialist.
Anyway, certainly looking forward to more of this.
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Thank you so much!
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Great ideas! Can't wait to use them for the rest of the story.
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To be honest, they were more guesses than ideas, but thanks very much.