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This story is a sequel to The Ghost of Chicken Scootaloo


Jessi Trotsky is a teal-green unicorn filly with a wavy grayish-white mane and tail and dark orange eyes and her cutie mark is three rising golden stars with trails on her flanks. Something happened to her earlier and now, she doesn't trust other ponies. She honestly believes that it's much better to be alone... But later, Sunny Starscout and Izzy Moonbow went on an expedition to the west of Equestria, where they found Jessi living alone inside her cottage... Now, Sunny is determined to show the filly a better way!

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Why didn't you make this squeal about Apple Bloom or Sweetie Belle? I'm you already did one with Scootaloo, why not complete the set?

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Not a bad idea? Although the premise behind Chicken Scootaloo was that she was forced to wear that costume over the guilt and shame she felt about Apple Bloom... (Which mirrored how I felt about my dead mother!) I would need an entirely new premise for each of the other Crusaders? Well, Apple Bloom was turned into a birch tree in my scenario and those live for about 40 to 50 years. And so, the question becomes, what was her spirit doing after the tree died off? Then again, it would probably work better if she somehow met up with Sweetie Belle along the way? Sweetie Belle could be the one crusader who had a boring transition into death!

Thanks! I'll probably start writing this story, further on down the road! Uh, it's nowhere near ready yet! I'm thinking I should title it When a Tree Blooms... What do you think?

PS: Okay, I'm thinking a good opener for this would be a monologue by Apple Bloom describing her life as a tree... And then, she'll become enveloped in mist and arise in the land of the dead, with no idea of who she is, how she got there, or why she was there... And then, the story continues as Apple Bloom solves mysteries, that are in fact, allegories that I draw from my own life!

Comment posted by kerrypaul deleted May 7th, 2022

Where did Jessi Trotsky's name come from?

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To be honest with you, her name really has no special origin. I simply picked a good unisex name and added a good "pony-sounding" last name, Trotsky! The fact that it happens to be the same name as a famous communist is really a coincidence. There's no real meaning behind any of it...

Comment posted by William524 deleted Nov 21st, 2022
Comment posted by William524 deleted Nov 21st, 2022

What's up with the deleted comments?

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Okay, some a**hole spammed the comments earlier and so I blocked him after deleting the comments... Now, those signs are there and I'm not sure how or if I can get rid of them?

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