A Vinyl/Octavia fanfiction inspired from a piece of fanart, "Sorry can't fix this," by MoonlightCharmer: http://moonlightcharmer.deviantart.com/art/Sorry-can-t-fix-this-326914442
An argument between Octavia and Vinyl Scratch becomes heated, and Vinyl does something that threatens to tear their friendship apart forever. Dejected, depressed, and guilt-ridden, Vinyl attempts to drown her sorrows in several glasses of liquor, but soon discovers that hard-drinking won't help make amends, or make her feel any better about what happened.
Chapters (4)
Very good, i liked it but now im all
I liked it. It had a very natural feel to it and it felt that there were true feelings in this story. I feel like Vinyl is lucky that TMZ doesn't exist in Equestria. Liked the happy ending and it wasn't to
o long.
this story definitely deserves to be much more famous than only with 7 thumb-ups
Are you going to continue this ? please say yes
Thanks, guys!
1397186 I think this story more or less ends here, though I've considered adding to it. I did have a couple of ideas for extra chapters, but that's pretty much what they would be, extra chapters. I do, however, want to keep writing Vinyl/Octy fics, and if I come up with a good idea, I'll definitely go for it.
well............
Personally? I thought the story was too short.
This is an idea that could have been drawn out. I liked it; don't get me wrong. But everything happened so quickly and without any background (Chapters to give us an idea of Octavia and Vinyl's relationship) or really much time to digest the final resolution. A chapter detailing a day post-cello destruction before Vinyl meets Coda, to show us the true impact of how much the broken Cello meant and to give Vinyl a chance to really reflect in the light of day would have been great additions to this story.
But, as it was, the story was a solid 7/10. Thanks for it!
-The Librarian
This looks like it will be a good story but the best part is when i scrolled down to the bottom of the page and found an ad for anger management
Okay, that pegasus was a genuine class A bitch, good job on her and I hope to god she gets something coming to her.
Honestly, you can't hate a story like this. You can find it boring, unoriginal, or to short, but you can't hate a story like this.
Good work.
Alright, firstly I'd like to say a very well written short story, albeit a little too short.
Perhaps in the future condense instead of making 4 short little chapters, either combine them into a longer chapters, or do as many others have down and create a oneshot. But, it's only a suggestion. Anyway, good luck to you in the future, and happy New Year.
The plot is solid, the scenario is very believable, and the emotions are indeed there however again its just a tad bit too short. One thing thats nagging heavily is Tavi's and Vinyl's relationship. Are they a couple? Are they just roommates? Nothing was really sad to hint in either direction, and while it's overall fine, and leaves to the imagination to ponder and create possibilities, for hardcore Tavi/Scratch shippers (like myself) it can be a bit irking not knowing whether or not they're a couple.
In any case, again well written with no noticeable grammatical errors even if it's rather short.
Peace- Exodious, the one between light and darkness
The poor cello.
AND IM A CELLIST!!!
You hit an f instead of b
:p
Gore tag?
Cruelty against Cellos!
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They were both drunk. Let it go.
Kinda hoped Vinyl plays a few notes.
Kinda missing a chapter!? :(
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Dude, that comment is over three years old. Why the heck are you responding to it? By now the chances of me remembering the story or having the exact same opinion is pretty damn slim.
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Then read again and tell me what you think :))